heaven in a dot

by jazzy75Houston, Texas, USA

Oct 2009 1,273 Views 24 comments

heaven in a dot

Author: jazzy75

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Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

a dear friend once told me wysiwyg

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Comments (24)

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 24, 2009

Up to the challenge I see.Pretty vacant in Heaven. Pretty
exclusive....dots for sure. You have now got to be the winner
for minimalist(no spell check!)

Hey its WYSIWYG!!

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 24, 2009

boyshchrm6 - yes cheers to wysiwyg

Thanks for the inspiration my friend!

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaOct 24, 2009

Pretty sure you're the record holder now jazzy.
Congrats!

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 24, 2009

jazz yessss sufficient a dot for heaven!
love you dear one thankyou bless you for the beauty of your Light!

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 25, 2009

not going dotty are you my friend??
rob

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 25, 2009

Awesome-What you see is what you get! I love it Jazzy-you are the queen of minimalism!!!

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 25, 2009

yeah, and steven hawkinge agrees......it all started from a dot......lol.....true.........xxx

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 25, 2009

sshore, u know dear one

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 25, 2009

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 26, 2009

Rob, a little dot happy lately! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 28, 2009

Thanks gypsyheart! Just having a little fun

virgosignSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaOct 28, 2009

jazzy, from all your works, i picked this one to 'read'as a first....with a title like that, i didn't know what to expect, and that's the beauty in your 'dot'.....with imagination, can be anything. very good

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 29, 2009

Andrew - my book is on it's way:-) Thank you my friend

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 30, 2009

virgosign - yes this one has a serious side as well. thank you for your comments...let the immagination take flight!!

UrLove123Norfolk, Virginia USAOct 30, 2009

wysiwyg = what you see is what you get.

Makes me think of Warhol. Like how he raised the question of what is art? His art largely was comprised of dots coming together to make a picture. Also made me think of these two words.

vestige - 1 •trace: an indication that something has been present
2 •The mark of the foot left on the earth; a track or footstep; a trace; a sign; A faint mark or visible sign left by something which is lost, or has perished, or is no longer present; remains
the smallest quantity or trace b : footprint.
3 •A visible mark created by the manual process of finishing parts when the gate is trimmed. Ejector pins also may leave a vestige where they impact the part

verisimilitude - 1 •the property of seeming true, of resembling reality; resemblance to reality, realism; a statement which merely appears to be true
2 •the trait of seeming truthful or appearing to be real, from the Latin veri similis, "like the truth")
3 •the appearance of truth; the quality of seeming to be true

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 30, 2009

Very cool, this one is Jazzy I like it, as weird as it may sound alot of thought put into it. Cheers my friend ty. :)

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USAOct 31, 2009

UrLove123, I am touched by your comments :-) When a poem allows the reader to engage and question his/her experience then (to me) it is cosidered a work of art. I am honored that you participated in the creation of this with me. And I really love the two words you presented. Cheers!

jazzy75OPHouston, Texas USANov 23, 2009

Bentlee -- right you are my friend...thought converged to a dot over many years. thank you

walkermanok, IndiaNov 23, 2009

dots on the landscape !! (courtesy P.G.W.)

surprizemenew orleans, Louisiana USAMar 22, 2017

To see a world in a grain of sand,
or heaven in a dot,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in all time slots

Clever transformation using dot! I wish I would of thought of it first! :)

can a comment be better late than never?

sorry for my poor attempt to expand on it

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMar 22, 2017

(.) !

Love it!

Cafe

2828sunfougeres, Pays de la Loire FranceMar 25, 2017

heaven is more than a dot , heaven is a journey ,like a flame needs air ,the journey will always burn within u .

online today!

southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMar 25, 2017

See Jazzy it was unique to put that title, curiosity!!!! You have more than 700 views.... but Cafe made me laugh so much with his posted comment. (.) ! Heaven is more much than a dot for sure! SM