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ice maiden

A maiden came to me I saw ,
With frosted claws,
And mind of ice.
Her sweet side was hard to find,
A gift of words showed no thaw.
My heart stabbed,
Yet her beauty led me on.
Was i mad , to carry on?
I dared to reply, To show her that,
I do no wrong,
I wish to visit her world, And whats going on
With a kiss at the end of my mail,
I hoped she would return,
Slowly , she understood,
I mean no harm ,
If only she could,
But my ice maiden took the plunge ,
And called ,and said,
She aint so bad ,
It must be me instead,
But now i have a friend ,
And she's not so icey as i thought,
She's the greatest friend in the world !
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Posted: Nov 2012

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Comments (2)

morgen90210
Beautiful tale ...
Sorry if I make a small correction on the word 'icey' it's 'icy' my dear ....i enjoyed it sad flower
chatsalotta
Thank you morgen for your comment. I'm glad you liked it ,, think my mistake was because i may have been a bit sleep'E'y haha. doh
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