I have seen the problem, and it is us

The walk from Ground Zero is so short to Staten’s terminal,
A visitor first sees the spot where terror struck,
Then takes a ferry to the Staten’s oceanfront,
To see the waste in Sandy’s wake – a dire sight.

So sad to say, but this is what the tourists have done,
Go there to gawk instead of lending hand to traumatized,
Go back to lunch and then go out to have good time,
This is what happens through the loss of human touch.

Such thing as charity no longer seems a sane or urgent task,
Neglect feels justified - just look away and pass,
A link that once connected us with needy ones is cut,
In storms of life we ‘makers’ are dismissing ‘takers’ thus.

While stricken areas are without power, water, gas
The luxury goods merchants boost their profits high
By pushing buyers as if Far Rockaways were that far,
So very distant as if occupyng planet Mars.

Some general’s affair – it reveals a world to us,
High-ranking military sending soldiers off to fight
Live large & party hearty with contractors, socialites.
A “social compact” of democracy rewritten is by money many times.

Instead of us forgoing some of our freedoms, rights
For benefits of living in the world of high morals,
The reach buy back their liberty to do what right they find
With no regard for anyone, with no respect for us.

Thus burdens to sustain the life, society to last
Are left to those who lack in wealth, to people just like us.
This, as it seems, is failure in Christian faith of ours,
Of self-absorption in the face of shredded social compact.

Our failure in catering to rich and affluent ones,
In never teaching them humility & grace in life.
Our failure in the provision comfort, cozy place
For comfortable ones who do not care a damn.

Now on discovery of money’s loyalty to its own selfish self,
Of progress solely in the sympathy with the have-nots, not wealth,
This could be close to next awakening of ours - not less,
Speak truth to power, do not stand in line for crumbs from table.
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
This is poetic rendering of an article from Washington post, which impressed me very much. You may have not read it, so this here poem may draw your attention to the problems, of which we are the culprits mostly through indifference, callousness, lack of faith (The Washington Post, "I have seen the problem, and it is us" By Tom Ehrich| Religion News Service, Published: November 21).
All the long time I’ve been away I’ve followed, dear poets, your progress on this site with admiration. Thank you!

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JimEee
The reality of the have nots!

It's a shame!

The rich and famous & people in charge of USA decisions and charity,are of the mind set of "Queen Marie Antoinette"
She is attributed to the saying,

"Quils mangent de labrioche"
Which literally means "Feed them Cake".

"Money begets money"

The rich get richer and the poor get poorer!

And the poor must look after themselfs!

Your poem give one to ponder!

Marikia, Well done!

JimEee
Ondos
Welcome back dear lady...
....thanks for the reminder
mcradloff
There has been a demonization of the rich and I think it is justifiable as it was when I first started paying attention to it back in the 80's. The rich used to be younger, but their generation is now retiring from being bosses and has left many without jobs. They do their charity work, but the real charity was giving someone else a job.doh
Yankee4you
Nice to see your rich commentary so elegently measured again. It's amazing how engulfed many people we have become living in the rage of fear where some will still try and hide deeper vulnerbilities that always protected one in one's youth...hide perhaps from a more shameful disdain created in their place....an artifical sanctuary...in haste to look the other way....but not all Americans behave in this fashion...where even hundreds of miles away...in many small towns here and elsewhere hundreds and thousands of volunteers; many teens and elderly alike, filled trucks with relief supplies...all bound for our neighbors in New York....handshake heart beating
Yankee4you
Happy....The same as we did as kids...but it's a whole new game now...where the poor kids no longer get to play with those kids locked up in their gated communities....money truly has become the root of so much decay in our society....
niah9
Marikia...we have missed you, and thank you for putting many of our thoughts into text....Kathyteddybear
marikia
Amazing comments - learned much from all of them.
This was a picture described by the author - and it was an alarm voiced so clearly - I couldn't leave it unnoticed, who can?! There are all kinds of people, I agree, there are good and bad ones, and many other types in between. But when disaster strikes all the differences surface and become conspicous.
Many thanks for your touching welcome, Niah.
morgen90210
Marika Niah you got me inspired to write a different take to yours ...many thanks
orientalkoru
Hi Marikia... it's great to once again have the chance to read your deep, inspiring writes. Welcome back...or let me say...welcome home rather! thumbs up wine hug
gnj4u
Hi, marikia,
I have seen the problem, and it is us ...Yes, and, for better or worse, we are also the solution. So much work must be done. Hopefully, the article and your skillful poetic rendition Of self-absorption in the face of shredded social compact will allow us to see what's happening to the fabric of our existence. To complete the picture, we need to also see not only images of what good there already is but also what can be. It's good to see you back in Poet's Corner. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
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