such a long time ago and yet it is so clear. i see so vividly, my love of my dreams.
she was so beautiful in her blood red array. i loved her so badly i felt hurt in a way.
i paid her to please me on most saturdays' nights. pushing speed insanely delighting me mainly.
one day i was careless and i had let her down, was slow on reflexes, could not stop her in time.
she purred like a kitten after each change of oil. renewing her sparkplugs we made a lovely show.
she was my first motor, sixty-five BHP. her name was a FIAT made me happy you see.
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
not a serious one obviously. i was thinking of my coming of age, and obviously my first new car .. in my eyes the most beautiful little FIAT 128 in rosso-ossido colour. 2 doors, alloys and wide tyres. and yes i did let her down with my first motoring accident........aahhh, 35 years - such a long time, but can seem so 'like yesterday'. i hope this brought back some of your own pleasant memories :) xx virgosign
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 25, 2009
talent really u r,u have really sweet imagination and beauty gift,i know this mdel of car , u make me rememeber my nissan sunny 98 , thanks for ur beauty mind
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 25, 2009
Awesome virgosign...big smile on my face...started to worry at the 4th verse about this love-affair...good fun read
cuddly38Arlington, Texas USAOct 25, 2009
Loved it! So funny. Please write another one for a fellow Virgo.
glad this made you guys and thanks for letting me know.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 6, 2011
but made me laugh for another reason....my dad was buying me my first car because dance teachers work really late and it wasn't safe before midnight out alone in London....I saw a dear little Fiat... 500 I think, and my mum called it a rabbit hutch on wheels...dad wouldn't buy it, incase a red double decker bus ran over it....Memories....Niah
Hi, virgosign, Though I missed this on its first revolution, I'm glad that I heard the motor purr this time! Enjoyed! And, who said love can't be bought!
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So funny.
Please write another one for a fellow Virgo.
Though I missed this on its first revolution, I'm glad that I heard the motor purr this time! Enjoyed! And, who said love can't be bought!