The man I wanted to be

I look inside me,
Trying to see,
A vision of the man
I wanted to be,
With wisdom in his eyes,
You could tell he was wise,
When he was talking
there was never a lie,
And though he wasn't perfect
you could tell the man tried,
The twists and turns of life had shaped him,
And he never let it break him,
Life is hard, but he was harder,
This took him higher,faster,farther,
I open my eyes after seeing these things,
Wishing, wondering "Is that man me?"
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2012

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orientalkoru
I love this Madtat! "Taking the time to search the meaning of our lives is worthwhile. Knowing what is it that we want in our lives...that's even better! If you can dream, you can do it! For you already have in you everything you need to that dream your reality." thumbs up
orientalkoru
typos again.. sorry... I meant "everything you need to make that dream your reality...
Nuwahri61
Great write Madtat......really enjoyed this mate .......cheers
regards Nu
Nuwahri61
Great write Madtat......really enjoyed this mate .......cheers
regards Nu
madtat29
Ty Oriental..always like your comments..make me think..drinking
madtat29
Glad you enjoyed it bud... cheers
TheKoreanGhost
Madtat, enjoyed it man.
I too question the man i have become, became . Do it all the time, cause each day i wake, i'm never the same as i was the day before.applause cheers
miss_mysterious
Such a beautiful write my friend....
Loved it hug
madtat29
Hells yeah KG ...never stop improving right...later brobeer
madtat29
Ty mysty cheers
Ladybee42
idea Perhaps it was you in the future! Who knows Madtat who really knows?

hmmmThen again, it may just have been a daydream thing.
daydream

Cool write

purple heart purple heart
madtat29
Maybe bee..maybe..thanks for stopping by drinking
dovegrey
i am glad to see you around again. I really like this.
cafetwo2010
Great write my friend. Self examination is a good thing and you passed
the exam..
madtat29
Thanks cafe ..sometimes I guess you have to school yourself...drinking
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