I want your lips to press against mine our tongues to meet for the first time I'm sorry I just don't know how to ask so I hide my feelings behind a mask I don't want to let it show
In bed I twist and turn my eyes long to see you my lips again with their curse at night my want to kiss you is so much worse
When I wake up and the morning sky is as blue as the Caribbean sea and love birds fly across it singing songs of love and luxury I reach out to grab you as if my mind wont believe your not here I want t kiss you, but I just don't know how to ask.
As a salesman I have learnt to do what i do not want to do,the number of yes i get compensate for the few no. Open your mouth ands say what you want you may just be surprised.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 6, 2012
When I wake up and the morning sky is as blue as the Caribbean sea and love birds fly across it singing songs of love and luxury I reach out to grab you as if my mind wont believe your not here I want t kiss you, but I just don't know how to ask.
Really like the latter highlighted stanza.Life is short so go for it
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKDec 7, 2012
Hi Lorii, enjoyed your poem & I agree with M.M..great last stanza ..Grab your chances..live, love, laugh & smile & enjoy!!
JimEeeNew Haven, Connecticut USADec 7, 2012
You have stirred the fires within your readers! I am sure, that as I, they have the desire to kiss your tender lips in return!
Well Done! JimEee
(May I suggest as a fellow poet, that you use a different background color. The Dark Red makes your poem hard to read)
A lighter background color would be much better! Hope you don't mind the suggestion.
loriiOPlondon, Greater London, England UKDec 8, 2012
Well hello there, :)
prenge - lolz cool advice, thankies for reading :)
Poetnumber1- Ah you're my fave poet on here lolz im always happy to see you've read my poems lolz and yes life is too short, but i cannot help but be too shy to go for it loolz im a shy person. thank you for reading :)
LadyMorgana60 - Thank you for reading :) i love your photo by the way, your very pretty :) im so wanting to just tell the guy lol but im a girl shouldnt he be the one to make the first move?
JimEee - thank you for reading :) i took your advice i think i picked those colours in a hurry lool. but yeah im glad i stirred fires in my readers lol its always good to tap in to emotions :) thankies for reading
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When I wake up and the morning sky is as blue as the Caribbean sea
and love birds fly across it singing songs of love and luxury
I reach out to grab you as if my mind wont believe your not here
I want t kiss you, but I just don't know how to ask.
Really like the latter highlighted stanza.Life is short so go for it
I am sure, that as I, they have the desire to kiss
your tender lips in return!
Well Done!
JimEee
(May I suggest as a fellow poet,
that you use a different background color.
The Dark Red makes your poem hard to read)
A lighter background color would be much better!
Hope you don't mind the suggestion.
prenge - lolz cool advice, thankies for reading :)
Poetnumber1- Ah you're my fave poet on here lolz im always happy to see you've read my poems lolz and yes life is too short, but i cannot help but be too shy to go for it loolz im a shy person. thank you for reading :)
LadyMorgana60 - Thank you for reading :) i love your photo by the way, your very pretty :) im so wanting to just tell the guy lol but im a girl shouldnt he be the one to make the first move?
JimEee - thank you for reading :) i took your advice i think i picked those colours in a hurry lool. but yeah im glad i stirred fires in my readers lol its always good to tap in to emotions :) thankies for reading