You are not the only one who's wondering, dear poet. Below another gifted poet is putting himself the same question, wondering what to do or rather whether he could bear letting her go - what if he couldn't, what then?! Don't hurt yourself if things go the wrong way, cause decision is not only ours, though we would prefer that it should be, stand up to it and keep searching.
Should I? Here I am. Lying next to you. My heart pounding. Thoughts racing in my mind, Wondering what to do. Should I tell you I love you? Should I wrap you in my arms and hold you close? Should I keep you here, next to me? Should I take you by the hand? Should I keep a picture in my mind? The real question, though, is could I? Could I bear to let you go? (by ohart6)
JimEeeOPNew Haven, Connecticut USADec 10, 2012
Cabal123 I think you are right Thanks for the input regards JimEee
JimEeeOPNew Haven, Connecticut USADec 10, 2012
Marikia, Ah! The back bone to stand-up for ones dream
Tis it not easier to say Should I ... then to say I do!
I know one thing I should do ... Thank my friend for being you! Should I .... I do!
JimEee (thanks for the poem by ohart6 never heard if before)
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoDec 10, 2012
Being a romantic on many levels i can relate to passionate feeling of love such as portrayed in this piece.Loving this one JimEee
You should never regret what you do do - whatever it may be - to be or not to be? that is the question! Whatever makes you feel comfortable JimEee.
loriilondon, Greater London, England UKDec 10, 2012
Awh, such a cute poem..,i would say go for it, lolz but for some reason im just the same as you i never go for the person i want lolz its too scary lol
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Should I?
Here I am. Lying next to you.
My heart pounding. Thoughts racing in my mind,
Wondering what to do.
Should I tell you I love you?
Should I wrap you in my arms and hold you close?
Should I keep you here, next to me?
Should I take you by the hand?
Should I keep a picture in my mind?
The real question, though, is could I?
Could I bear to let you go?
(by ohart6)
I think you are right
Thanks for the input
regards
JimEee
Ah! The back bone to
stand-up for ones dream
Tis it not easier to say
Should I ... then to say I do!
I know one thing I should do ...
Thank my friend for being you!
Should I .... I do!
JimEee
(thanks for the poem by ohart6 never heard if before)
Amazing poem :)
Lorii x
Kind regards
Charlie
Ladybee42
Loril
TheKoreanGhost
Thank you. I listened to your wonderful poet's comments and trembled when you said I should!
Thank you
JimEee
Ladybee42 You comments, inspired me to write "The comfort of Ones Heart" with your to be or not to be! Thanks!