"Damaged Mind...Broken Soul"

about the shooter who killed
children in their innocence
no truer words could be told.

Was there evil in the play
that unfolded worlds today?
Would such evil by self succumb
to the perpetrators’ gun?

Plans were surely made
bullet-proof vest donned
munitions thoughtfully gathered
before breaking of day’s dawn.

What happened we know
yet, reasons why may never show.
Though many suffer, down that path
rarely do most let selves go.

In shock over such tragic deeds
school, community taken to knees
as gun sounds penetrate air
heard by world citizens who care.

Bullets reigned down on very young
rifle yielded by another of our own
so many lives shot on front line
of life’s newest battlefield zone.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2012
About this poem:
written last night with a profound sense of grief and sympathy for the families directly impacted by this incomprehensible act of violence
(two additional verses not included here)

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Comments (10)

Ladybee42
It's a great tragedy Joy, I have no words to say how sad it all is.

sad flower
Daveland
God bless those poor innocent children, they know nothing, their lives were just wasted by nobody but a desperate killer! To hell his soul! Their souls in peace..Go rest high...and higher...
elo69
nice write Gnj4u...what a senseless tragedy....elo..wave
SundaySilence
Horrendous grief shared by a nation. There are just too many nut cases on the loose the product of their upbringing.
prenge
It seem if we cannot heal those damaged mind and broken soul we may have a repeat. God forbid that such an incident should ever happen again.
TheKoreanGhost
Gn4u.
Compelling write,
Lifes new battlefield can be anywhere , the war starts in their mind, which manifested itself into reality .
My heart goes to out to all involved .
What a nightmare !!

Charlie
niah9
Well said gnj....I know we think about it, at loss for words....you have been our voice...thank you...Kathyteddybear
Fellsman
Hi GNJ

Events of this nature are beyond comprehension: The slaughter is dominating news channels here in the UK too - it is impossible to get the images of those innocent little children out of one's mind. One's thoughts are also with the teachers who were killed, some of whom were so young and vibrant themselves.

You chronicle the horror with great sensitivity.

Bill
Odette67
Bullets reigned down on very young
rifle yielded by another of our own
so many lives shot on front line
of life’s newest battlefield zone.

Dear joy,

many of us in this world have been bullied, been brought up in poverty and drunkeness but we don't go out and kill little kids..I think there are evil people in this world who are devoid of any human feelings towards their fellow man..I wish I had the answer..it is just heartbreaking. Thank you. angel
snowytop
On the sameday as this insane act occurred in Md. a Chinese man stabbed 22 schoolchildren in China. Fortunately none of the children died,but the World just seems to be spinning out of control. sad flower
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