~I give you my~

smile, you see it. . . I give you my hand, you hold it. . . I give you my arms, you embrace me. . . I give you my fears, you help strengthen them. . . I give you my love, you recieve it. . . I give you my sad moments, you understand them. . . I give you my trust, you never breach it. . . I give you my short comings, you help me grow them. . . I give you respect, you thank me. . . I give you all you've given me~
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Posted: Oct 2009

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Sunnn
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Southmiami1234
I give you my THANKS for sharing.
Nicely written. bouquet
gypsyheart
Well written poem Bentlee.Thanks for sharinghug bouquet
jazzy75
Bentlee - beautiful poem with great meaningteddybear
poetengineer
i give u my adore and respect about this very beautiful poem my dear friend , i really enjoy read it , it is as sweet series of love , thanks for ur beauty mind
jerseygirl49
Sounds like the perfect partner, if you already have this...what a wealthy man indeed.wine bouquet Thanx for writing..JGwave
amahlala
Love the poem Bentlee, beautifully expressed.
Bentlee
Ty Sunn, glad you enjoyed:)
Bentlee
Thank you SouthMiami so happy you liked it:)
Bentlee
Thank you Gypsy so glad you enjoyed:)
Bentlee
Jazzy yes it does, an really if two people want it that bad, isn't it sort of attainable? Ty.
Bentlee
Ty Khaled it is that of love an what two can share together if they work at it, ty for your kindness as always:)
Bentlee
Thanks Jersy girl, I certainly would be weathy if that was in my life:) however it's not. Was close to that at one time many years ago.
Milanda
so lovely thumbs up applause thanks for sharing conversing
Bentlee
Ty Milanda for enjoying my writing:)
boyshchrm6
Really nicely put.Beautiful flow Bentlee. Really, really enjoyed
reading this one.cool angel crying handshake applause angel
Bentlee
:) ty boysh as I loved writing this one as well. Ty for enjoying reading an seeing it:)
longhairedwoman
This represents the ideal relationship to me... absolutely ideal.
Bentlee
Cool glad you liked it Ama, ty for your comment:)
Bentlee
Yes it does L h w, I've know people who have had this. Their conviction in it was heal the past an loose the ego. I believe their words. :)
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