Rainy day Beach

Bentlee

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Oct 2009 702 Views 14 comments

Rainy day Beach

Author: Bentlee

a billion an one times that again as I walked the beach the shapes of stones under my feet, a drizzled rain the whole time came. . yet it didn't as the waves slapped the shore an the water it crested into white cap's roll, fossils an quartz with infinitive hue a wave caught my foot an found my dry sock, thirty minutes of this today. . . . . then, back to work:)

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Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

Working on a cottage has it's attributes:) I wanted to share this time I had today with you all:)

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Comments (14)

amahlala

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAOct 28, 2009

I can smell the sea air and feel the water...thanks Bentlee

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 28, 2009

:) my pleasure Ama, even with the rain it was a great thirty minutes:)

andrew149

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 28, 2009

In a way I envy you that thirty minutes......because I live with it, I tend to take it for granted sometimes......but don't get me wrong I still love it.....and a lovely poem.....thankyou bentlee....

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 28, 2009

I understand exactly what you said my friend, an can relate, ty so much for all your meaningful posts my friend:)

aware3

aware3navarre, Florida USAOct 29, 2009

Sounds like a wonderful bliss filled rainy day, n like ama I too can smell the sea air, n hear the waves slap the shore-as u put it ! Thanks Bentlee, n what fun u must b having over there. Blessings aware3

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 29, 2009

Thanks aware, it is a great place to spend time eh. I've read some of your spiritual writing ty for sharing your thoughts as i've enjoyed it all:)

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 29, 2009

Bentlee - descriptive an beautiful if only for a moment.

poetengineer

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 29, 2009

thanks for share this nice time with us , simply beautiful

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 29, 2009

I,m drying you socks here, no sorry dont mean to jest I did enjoy that thankyou

gypsyheart

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 29, 2009

Splendid picture i saw through your eyes Bentlee-wow...pity only 3o minutes :)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 29, 2009

Jazzy ty, I was there again today an back on saturday for about 5 hours. Is a sweet bit of time spent:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 29, 2009

My pleasure my friend, ty Khaled Is like what you have in your profile picture:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 29, 2009

Sweet thought Redex ty an so glad you enjoyed:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 29, 2009

Was a peaceful thirty minutes Gypsy doin something I love, ty for your thoughts an happy you could walk it too:)

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