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In the sway of creation

I was born beautiful,

a perfect child of love.



But on my way

to ever after

I gave myself away

and became the perfect offering.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
This is an exercise in brevity with weight...

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beautifulyou
'I was born beautiful,
a perfect child of love'



I think the beauty of this truth is that no matter how you may change or experience the impact of life, you can always return to yourself, at any moment, by remembering and living into your innate essence.


Thank you for your sharing. You very much succeeded with being succinct.
Skybow
Thank you for being so kind.
Ladybee42
Skybow - Brevity can be so lovely and here it is just so.

teddybear purple heart purple heart
Skybow
Thank you Ladybee, you rock and you roll...hugs.
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