Crabby Old Man

What do you see nurses? . . . .. . What do you see?
What are you thinking . . . . . When you're looking at me?
A crabby old man . . . . . Not very wise,
Uncertain of habit . . . . . With faraway eyes?

Who dribbles his food . . . . . And makes no reply.
When you say in a loud voice . . . . . 'I do wish you'd try!'
Who seems not to notice . . . . . The things that you do.
And forever is losing . . . . . A sock or shoe?

Who, resisting or not . . . . .. Lets you do as you will,
With bathing and feeding . . . . . The long day to fill?
Is that what you're thinking? . . . . . Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes, nurse . . . . . You're not looking at me.

I'll tell you who I am. . . . . . As I sit here so still,
As I do at your bidding, . . . . . As I eat at your will.
I'm a small child of Ten . .. . . . With a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters . . . . . Who love one another.

A young boy of Sixteen . . . . With wings on his feet..
Dreaming that soon now . . . . . A lover he'll meet.
A groom soon at Twenty . . . . . My heart gives a leap.
Remembering, the vows . . . . .. That I promised to keep.

At Twenty-Five, now . . . . . I have young of my own.
Who need me to guide . . . . . And a secure happy home.
A man of Thirty . . . . . My young now grown fast,
Bound to each other . . . . . With ties that should last.

At Forty, my young sons . . . . . Have grown and are gone,
But my woman's beside me . . . . . To see I don't mourn.
At Fifty, once more, babies play 'round my knee,
Again, we know children . . . .. . My loved one and me.

Dark days are upon me . . . . . My wife is now dead.
I look at the future . . . . . Shudder with dread.
For my young are all rearing . . . . . Young of their own.
And I think of the years . . . . . And the love that I've known.

I'm now an old man . . . . . And nature is cruel.
Tis jest to make old age . . . .. . Look like a fool.
The body, it crumbles . . . . . Grace and vigor, depart.
There is now a stone . .. . . Where I once had a heart.

But inside this old carcass . . . . . A young guy still dwells,
And now and again . . . . . My battered heart swells.
I remember the joys . . . . . I remember the pain.
And I'm loving and living . . . .. . Life over again.

I think of the years, all too few . . . . . Gone too fast.
And accept the stark fact . . . . That nothing can last.
So open your eyes, people . . . . . Open and see.
Not a crabby old man . . . Look closer . . . See ME!!
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Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
When an old man died in the geriatric ward of a nursing home in North Platte, Nebraska; it was believed that he had nothing left of any value. Later, when nurses were going through his meager possessions, they found this poem. When you meet an older person who you might brush aside without looking at the young soul within, think twice. (Author is deceased and unknown)

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cherryreggae
Hi Yankee!!! This poem is hanging next to the office at my job. I read it often & although its such a sad reminder, of when life's. Conditions change through age. It's a learning lesson for us all, thanks 4 sharing I love this poem!!!handshake gift heart beating
Yankee4you
Hi Cherry. Thanks for sharing that!! Tonight was the first night I ever read this poem. I am so happy that others have too! No matter what happens in life we must never assume we know how others feel...which is perhaps the whole message? The whole meaning of poetry?? It's a good question? teddybear
Ladybee42
Very poignant Yankee, worth remembering your words here for sure.


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gnj4u
Hi, Yankee4you,
Someone recently posted this in Poet's Corner. The poem, titled "Too Soon Old", was written by Dave Griffith of Fort Worth, Texas. Yes, it is good to be reminded that we are all hoping to be "seen" as people, regardless of what appears on the outside. Thanks for sharing.
Macduff5
Hi Yankee,

I have to say this is a wonderful piece. Seems like Gnj has tracked down the author. What a poignant story about how they found the poem in the old man's possessions. It just adds to the sadness of a life obviously so fruitful. sad flower wine
studecar
Hello Yankee, I thank you for posting this poem,of all I have read on CS I rate it to be the very best, you have given the members of CS something of extreme value. Incidently, I am nearing what the poem is about. studecarthumbs up
rapturecapture
Hi Yankee...
Thanking you for posting this poem... "blew me away" both the poem and how it was found. heart wings
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