~Stuck in a Rainbow~

a colourful bright hung in the air jumpin colour to colour the grounds not in sight, so much fun all the while part time fun face in smile, they say at the end lay's a big pot a gold, whys it still there why's the story still told, if you slide down a colour will it on you switch sides, or during those times it's kaleidoscope view, geometric puzzle the minds put in place. . . .
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
Always different ways to look a things:)

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andrew149
A tad pessimistic......anyone with any sense just knows, the pot has been claimed many times........it is just always there for the next person that has the wherewithall to go get it.......andrew....
Bentlee
Lol like I said in it so many ways too look at things including your's cheers Andrew:)
amahlala
But Andrew not everyone wants to go themselves personally and get the pot...entitlement seems to rule the day sometimes...but it is a good poem Bentlee...handshake
Bentlee
Ama, exactly what this poem says, ty for your thoughts.
andrew149
Yes sorry bentlee, it is an excellent poem,.......my comment was an observation from my day,....not critisism of your work,.....of which I have always enjoyed........Andrew....
Bentlee
Ah my friend is ok, i thought perhaps you had a busy day an your mind was focused elsewhere. Lol I get days of such too cheers Andrew:)
jazzy75
Bentlee, powerful poem with great meaning - love "geometric puzzle the minds put in place"! cool
gypsyheart
Very well expressed Bentlee.I like your poem.Thanks for sharinghug bouquet
poetengineer
i enjoy read this sweet poem ,thanks dear friend
Bentlee
Hi Jazzy ty. . yeah I kind a liked that too lol glad you enjoyed:)
Bentlee
Ty Gypsy, my pleasure, happy you liked it, I couldn't imagine bein stuck inside tho lol:)
Bentlee
My pleasure Khaled an ty for taking time to read an comment:)
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