~ Haiku ~ The Mood

Woke up to gray skies
Echoing above, filtered morning light
Yet my day's not blue~


~Bentlee~
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
a double meaning in this which way do you read it. The negative or the positive:) lol cheers all.


Re-shaped into Haiku form.

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Comments (11)

amahlala
Short, sweet and to the !handshake
jazzy75
Clever Bentlee...enjoyed reading this morning!wave
Bentlee
Lol yes I guess it is, ty Ama:)
Bentlee
Thanks Jazzy :) short an a thinker one, like your short's written:)
gypsyheart
Love it Bentlee-a half full glass:)hug bouquet
Bentlee
Lol cheers Gypsy to the glass half full:)
Bentlee
Re-shaped this into a Haiku. Cheers all wine
Ladybee42
laugh no your days not 'blue' thumbs up bouquet
Bentlee
lol ty Ladybee, as a matter a fact it was a very productive one lol. wine hug
agoodguy2have
the blue and the gray
heard thundering by dawn light
emotions doubled

nice ;-)
Bentlee
ty agoodguy,glad you liked it cheers mate cheers
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