Save them Lord...Save them...

Lord ,
I come before you humbly and honestly,
I've committed so many atrocities,
I know that you have been watching,
I'm not here to pray for me,
Lord, I beg for humanity,
There is happiness in the sad,
I've seen good amongst the bad,
Though not as many as before,
Not all are rotten to the core,
Many like me are doomed to hell,
But a chosen few could use your help,
Save them please , Your Mightiness,
Show your children the true and right in this,
I ask this prayer in your name and word,
Save them Lord, those that deserve...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013
About this poem:
Not really a religious or praying man much but I felt this when writing it...may it help those that need it...

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morgen90210
it takes a good heart to write this
I feel you brother this poem
speak boldly and sincerely
that much is true about you too!
gnj4u
Hi, madtat29,
While I hold the belief that Love carries more weight than hate, the side of goodness can benefit from all gifts; and, the poet's words add to that side of the scale. Thank you for sharing.
madtat29
I think we are all children of the father ...Ty morgen
madtat29
Gnj4u Ty for your insightful comment...
cherryreggae
Hi madtat....sincere & honest write, really feel this poem & the msg we need to hear.really enjoyed reading, in your cool way with wordscool dancing thanks4sharing!!!peace yay
madtat29
Aww cherry..you've a way with words yourself...handshake
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