Walk into eternity

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Feb 2013 883 Views 24 comments

Walk into eternity

Author: cafetwo2010

Walk into Eternity
Adorned with immortality
Stripped of flesh and bone
This primitive reality
Mind dimensions unknown
Spirit transcending time
Consciousness awakening from
itself
To a world beyond sublime
Infinity is but a moment, within
forever it is bound
Eternity is but a broken clock..
The only game in town-

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Posted: Feb 2013

About this poem:

A remake from a much earlier poem.

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Comments (24)

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 28, 2013

full of meaning a fine write

shadow

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 28, 2013

Ty shadow..thank you for your kind words..

beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 28, 2013

I'm snappin' my fingers cafe lol

Strong write hon, in meaning and in flow.

I very much resonate with this as a very simple yet profound truth concerning 'time'

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 28, 2013

Hi Cafe

Very interesting poem.

Eternity is but a broken clock..
The only game in town-

Time waits for no one...
Really enjoyed reading your thoughts,thank you

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAFeb 28, 2013

Honest, thought provoking write, enjoyed reading!! Thanks for sharing cafe!!!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 28, 2013

Ty beautiful.. Somewhere in time..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 28, 2013

Ty rapture.. I'm glad I took the time..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 28, 2013

Ty cherry.. Thank you kindly dear..

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 2, 2013

Hi Jim

I think there are some things that the human mind is incapable of grasping, the concepts of eternity where time never ends and a universe without boundaries of any kind is far too much for even the cleverest philosophers and scientists to comprehend, so what chance us mere mortals?

Meanwhile, at least we make the effort with our own puny strands of homespun philosophy.

Cheers buddy

Bill

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 2, 2013

Ty Bill.. I like a good mystery that we can eventually
figure out. The universe isn't one of them.lol.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 2, 2013

To a world beyond sublime
Infinity is but a moment, within
forever it is bound
Eternity is but a broken clock..
The only game in town

Lovely to read your excellent poems again Jim.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 2, 2013

Ty odette..Nice to hear from you dear.
Thanks

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 3, 2013

Enjoyed very much.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 3, 2013

Ty fjames..Thanks bro..

jk2youSYDNEY, New South Wales AustraliaMar 7, 2013

"Consciousness awakening from itself"

very interesting cafe

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 8, 2013

Ty jk2.. I was barely conscious when
I wrote that..It's about time I woke up.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 8, 2013

Eternity is but a broken clock, fine line Jim in a fine poem.
Rob

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 8, 2013

Ty rob..I thought the broken clock concept fit nicely
for an ending. Thanks much.

freedom64eastwood, Nottinghamshire, England UKMar 8, 2013

your cafe i want to sit and talk nice write

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 8, 2013

Ty freedom..Our hours are from seven to eternity..thanks much dear.

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 8, 2013

Mind dimensions unknown
Spirit transcending time
Consciousness awakening from
itself
To a world beyond sublime

What a concept my dear Jim. The mind's limited capacity to comprehend in a measurable equation of what TRULY IS OUT THERE. AND THIS IS ONE OF THE REASON WHY IT IS A LOT EASIER FOR ME TO BELIEVE IN GOD OR SUPREME BEING BECAUSE AS FAR AS I AM CONCERNED I WILL NEVER, EVER GRASP NOR COMPREHEND THIS MYSTERY YET THINKABLE PRESENCE OF POWER. MY LOVE, SENT ME A COPY ON YOU TUBE ABOUT THE LATEST DISCUSSION OF THIS AREA BY: DR. RICHARD DAWKINS, A PROF. IN CAMBRIDGE WHO HAS PHD IN BIOLOGY AND TOGETHER WITH PHYSICIST NEIL DE GRASSE TYSON, BRUSHED UP IN THE EQUATABLE, EXPLAINABLE POSSIBILITIES OF THE UNIVERSE AND ITS SOURCE AND COMPONENTS AND IT IS MIND BOGLING. GOOGLE, YOU TUBE AND JUST WRITE THEIR NAMES AND YOU HEAR IT FIRST HAND A SIMPLIFIED AND DOWN TO EARTH UNCOMPLICATED EXPLANATION. STILL TO ME IS A VERY MIND BOGLING VENTURE AND THEREFORE EASIER FOR ME TO BELIEVE IN GOD.

ANYWAYS THANKS FOR SHARING MY FRIEND.

phyllis

PS. Harvard university is eliminating the field of PHD IN PHILOSOPHY alone by itself. You have to be associated in the field of Science like Biologist now to undertake this area. If I am not mistaken. I will reconfirm this notion as I got it first hand from the great source of my knowledge, the man I love so much.

Thanks

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAMar 8, 2013

Ty smmerwind..I'm aware of Dawkins work and have
viewed Tyson's comments many times on the History
channel, (I live the history channel), and I'm convinced
that most of the theories these men put forth are 99%
'what if questions', and not to gainsay their great
knowledge, but their 'what if stuff,' quickly becomes
quite dogmatic..Hope they are given faith before they
discover that there are no atheists in hell.

godsprincessOwego, New York USAOct 2, 2017

Thank you Marikia for bringing these poems back to life. There are several of Cafe's I did read because I'm a newer one to the site even thought I've been on here a few years.

Kathy