kickit challenge

by cherryreggaebayside, New York, USA

Mar 2013 810 Views 15 comments

kickit challenge

Tommy tucker
tater tott
Took tomatoes
to tip top
Tossed, turned, tumbled
tripped turning trails,
Telling toothless
tongue tied tales.

Bloom baby boo
Busty bombshell
Boldly blue.
Bumping, boisterous,
Bumbling brew.
Bootylicious.
Boom
Boom
Boom!!!

Misty mountain,
mellow moon
Music made my
melody move
Majestic medley,
meaningful maze
More memories
makes my
Mind migrate...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

Thanks kickit for this challenge & fun write!!

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Comments (15)

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 4, 2013

This is Great Cherry!

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAMar 4, 2013

That last one really took it away ...smooth

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 4, 2013

Thats the fire

You blew this one away!

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMar 4, 2013

Hi Cherrie

This is class..I am blown away.. WoW Fantastic read and I loved the Tommy tucker, very well written Cherrie loved it as always

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Thanks so much paloma, always appreciate your kindness & comments.a fun write!!..

Thanks 4urcomment!!!madtat although short, its a challenge to write same letter words....phew!!!!

lol..Ty

Thankyou m it was a fun write...fire I like lol

Ty4ur comment!!

Thankyou Martina, Tommy Tucker had me tucked lol

but somehow got through it. Appreciate your feedback always ty

globegypsy4everstockbridge, Georgia USAMar 29, 2013

Clever format and interesting; one wonders if you won the challenge?

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 31, 2013

Hi globegypsy....and thankyou for your comment truly appreciate it. From time to time, we have poetry challenges. They are fun to join and a creative way to write so thats where these jumbled same words came from lol...ty again:)

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAMar 31, 2013

This is very cool Cherry, I didn't catch Kickit's challenge but I'm glad I caught this entry. Who did win I wonder? Or maybe he never said? Have a lovely Easter if you catch this in time.

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 31, 2013

My dear sister I don't know how I missed this but I'm glad I had a chance to read it

Happy Easter

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 31, 2013

Lol lady bee.....thanks so much I dont even know who won

but really enjoyed this fun write...ty for your comment & have a lovely easter

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 31, 2013

Thanks so much smmerwind!!! Appreciate your comment as always...have a lovely easter sis

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 1, 2013

Good stuff Cherri, once i thought something similar but you surely brought it home. Nice to see you....Jesse

TenderBabeLoveland, Colorado USAApr 1, 2013

You are talented indeed...

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAApr 1, 2013

Hi jesse....thanks 4 your comment, always appreciated! ! Nice seeing you to:0)....happy easter!!! Know its pretty much over lol but hope you enjoyed it ....cherie!