FTD

by gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts, USA

Mar 2013 760 Views 10 comments

FTD

Author: gnj4u

Fair-weather friend
foul-weather friend
forever faithful, feeling fine

‘Til temptation toppled
truth’s trajectory tumbled
toward tragic tangle

Downward, devoured distance
deliberate, decimated decline
destroying delicate duo

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2013

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Comments (10)

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 4, 2013

cool

nice
super

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 4, 2013

Another good one, I have been surprised by some of these as they are not easy to do.
Rob

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 4, 2013

Great write gnj4u....

well said.....Kathy

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Well done...gnj4u....its not as ez as it seems finding same letter words to put together!! I racked my brain a bit

lol. Nice write enjoyed Ty4sharing

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMar 5, 2013

Great write Joy,I cant write anymore my brain is gone rusty being domesticated.Lots of love.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 5, 2013

This is really good,its much harder than it looks though.

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMar 5, 2013

Hi Gnj

You have done a first rate job with this for sure! fantastic work dear lady & enjoyed..it isnt to easy either..

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 5, 2013

Wow my dear Joy, it is so amazing how we can construct such a masterpiece in a very limited structure. The last lines are so fluid.

I wished it wouldn't have been so but well, DOWNTURN sometimes is what we need to find ourselves back to WHERE WE WANT

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 5, 2013

I agree with Poet it is not as easy as it looks unless you don't may sense lol
very fine write well done

gnj4uOPBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 5, 2013

Hi, morgen90210, trurorob, niah9, cherryreggae, Paloma66, Poetnumber1, LadyMorgana60, smmerwind, and shadow1950,
My sincere thanks to each of you for the generosity of your time in reading and commenting on my challenge-write. I do appreciate your kind remarks.

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