2 poems

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Mar 2013 810 Views 8 comments

2 poems

Author: kickit22

POEM

POEM

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Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

I have all the poems submitted in my challenge they they all are soooi gooid
If i can find time i would comment on all.
For now thank you!

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Comments (8)

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAMar 9, 2013

This is pure genius Kick..2 poems..What can I say?
I will spend centuries peeling layer by layer the
deeper meaning of this linquistic marvel..But a
wonderful lady who lives on the rivers edge will
assist me..

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 9, 2013

I have to search for a deeper meaning to these two ghostly poems Mike lol.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAMar 11, 2013

Cafe your comments are such a delight thank you but.

It would be just so perfect if I could send you and the misses basket off fruit.
Sitting by the rivers edge for a decade is long long time. Dont marvel so much at the 2 poems you have a lady to attend to. Would be such a tragic turn if those 2 poems got in the way of attending to a maiden beauty..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAMar 11, 2013

Poetnmbr1

Dont need to search too deep they are right there. Where it says poem poem...lmao..
Thank my friend for a visit of my intentional blunder..

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAMar 11, 2013

Morgen
What can I Say its all in black and white

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMar 14, 2013

Hi kickit

This one passed me by...
I would say a nice and in-sight-full- take you have on
2 poems.

One wonders?..
Two a second take?..

Mmmm Thinking

Food for thought

beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 14, 2013

kickit,
these two poems..
it's like 'they came, they saw, they conquered'

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 14, 2013

I understand your excuse of writing this is because you are too busy Mike. Well said. I used to own a ssmall trucking company and boy, you can't even scratch your head. My exfather in law for all his life 60 yearsf and we sort of jump on it on the last years and we had to get out because it is way too high PACE and then money was just not that good. But you are your own broker owner operator and it is a lot better.

So on the poem I compose for you its so amazing and some did great jobs, too.

Don't work too hard okey?

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