Lonely sunset

by madtat29Farmington, New Mexico, USA

Mar 2013 699 Views 19 comments

Lonely sunset...

Author: madtat29

As I
watched the sunset
I cried
Remembering us
I died
Like the fading light
inside
Its just me tonight...

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Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

Old memories brought to the surface...

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Comments (19)

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 15, 2013

Hi, madtat29,
Hopefully, the Lonely sunset... was made easier to bear by sharing these tears of remembrance.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 15, 2013

Ah lonesome days missing a past lover,i can relate to this.

But when one door closes another one opens,hopefully very soon for you.Nicely penned.

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMar 15, 2013

beautiful

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 15, 2013

As I
watched the sunset
I cried
Remembering us
I died
Like the fading light
inside
Its just me tonight...

Poignant in it's loveliness.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 15, 2013

Short simple and carries more then its weight, genius MT thank you for sharing.....

....Jesse

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 16, 2013

oh my dear Tony, How has love forsaken you. Alas, it will soon show, sunsets and remembering with the glow, Love will come, I promise you.

Love it Tony, she that beats in your heart will soon come knocking, BE ON GUARD.

smmerwind

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 16, 2013

Ty fellow poets ..sometimes I'm just a big softy

I appreciate your sympathy and kind words...

beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 16, 2013

Another deeply moving write (((madtat,)))
succinct, and still it carries elegance

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 20, 2013

Ty Phyllis..its strange you say that...You gotta be some kinda psychic

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 20, 2013

Hells yeah Jesse thanks for reading bro...

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 20, 2013

Oddette good to see you always..glad you liked it...

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 20, 2013

Ty shadow!

SkymoreRiga, LatviaMar 20, 2013

'I died
Like the fading light ' - how bright it is said !

Thank you !

Sky

madtat29OPFarmington, New Mexico USAMar 29, 2013

Ty for reading skymore!Glad you stopped by

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKMar 29, 2013

We all desire company when we feel lonley like they say twos company threes a crowd good poem short to the point nice write indeed

elo69santa cruz, California USAMar 29, 2013

not just tonight friend...it takes more than just one lonely sunset to strike the chords of a soul...you string those nights together into years and maybe even years together into decades, that is where so many people live...nice write...elo..

BBMis4meHouston, Texas USAMar 29, 2013

Hi Tony,

Lonely sunset is very cute poem, so simple and so small but at the same time, so deeply and says a lot. Congratulation!

Happy Easter, dear friend :)

Blessings

Stell :)

beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 29, 2013

Just revisiting this wonderful write mad,

Lonely never sounded so beautiful