Caged Inside My Bones

My delicate heart made of flesh and blood
Beating over time that the tides define
How simple each stroke arrives with a thud
A boat rocks at anchor on mooring line

Spirits in life should we love make us dance
What we crave in crest is not coherence
Seek no softness in your cold abundance
Sharing only good grace in appearance

For weak becomes our will and cold our stones
While we age growing up instead of down
A beating heart so caged inside my bones
Like a head above water will not drown

Rise gentle over cresting waves my sun
What wonders where my beating heart begun
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
If you'd like to know what's in the ocean, you can just go to the surface and scrape some off.

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Comments (16)

elo69
nice write,feeling your age? know I feel mine/though still youngish..I pine at the loss of time....masterful ending

"What wonders where my beating heart begun"

regards....elo...
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trurorob
Nice one Chris.
Rob
cameal6
a caged heart....how true as our heart longs for what once was and what hopes tomarrow will bring.
CelticPoet12
Yankee, I love a good sonnet and this one is top drawer. Celtic
Poetnumber1
Very good Yankswow thumbs up
Yankee4youonline today!
Thanks Elo
watersandthewild
Great stuff Yank,
Ru
LadyMorgana60
Wonderful poem Yankee.. applause
Great lines make this a class sonnet..TY for sharing..wine dancing
SundaySilence
Whoa,

"Spirits in life should we love make us dance
What we crave in crest is not coherence
Seek no softness in your cold abundance
Sharing only good grace in appearance."

I'll tell you what...
we are all aging like fine wine and
your poetry...
is right up there with the best.



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rapturecapture
Hi Yankee

A cage of sweet bones,lovely bones.

Thank you for sharing
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Odette67
Cheer up Yankee..you look ageless to me with your boyish looks..A truly excellent Sonnet. purple heart
Yankee4youonline today!
Wow wow wow I'm overwhelmed with all the feedback on this one. Thanks everybody for your encouragment. This one came to me thinking about how trapped my heart feels inside a cage of bones...of course refering to my rib cage...haha...my ribs feel like bars on a cage sometimes....handshake wine
smmerwind
A good read yankee. A little different from your usua nature beautiful writes.

Thanks for the read
Fellsman
Hi Chris

Superb use of metaphor in this very well crafted sonnet, I'd never thought of the heart as being a prisoner inside one's ribcage...

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
Happygolucky4u
hmmm I enjoyed this poem. After giving this caged heart some thought it kind of made me sad. A heart should be free uh oh but of course the ribs can be there like a pretty dress. blues
darkhorse555
we sink so many times a beating heart caged beautiful piecethumbs up wine cheers
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