Deeply your eyes color gives them a glow Spreading such delicate bloom to the world Shining so bright since a long time ago Rare blossoms bursting out of damp earth hurled
Behind a great smile we greet tenderly Shimmer when in radiant sun its sheen With a gaze from the sky into the sea Mine deeply blue into less deeply green
We danced like lovers in a soft caress When drawn together once were caught within Love was a net stronger than will I guess When your eyes like a flower made me grin
Great is reflection of love all around Looking at the greatest jewel ever found
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
A little love love sonnet about a woman's eyes......
liorlaramieCape Town, Western Cape South AfricaMar 29, 2013
Thank you for sharing your poems. You capture the feelings of solitude in nature, especially of winter like a photograph or film, so visual, sad and beautiful. we are losing summer here and the scenes you create, move me in my mood of mourning for the vitality that is summer. For me it is like a prelude to a prolonged but temporary death. I am overwhelmed with sadness as I feel the new chill in the air.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 29, 2013
We danced like lovers in a soft caress When drawn together once were caught within Love was a net stronger than will I guess When your eyes like a flower make me grin
The eyes speak volumes... Another beautiful Sonnet Yankee.
Hi Rapture... Funny we say the same thing...but not sitting down...we say the eyes of the windows into our souls....there's certainly a lot that can be told about a person's health just looking into their eyes....
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKApr 3, 2013
Wonderful sonnet Yankee.. eyes are the widows of our souls, and reflected outwards .. I hope you find your "Eyes like a Flower" one day :)
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we are losing summer here and the scenes you create, move me in my mood of mourning for the vitality that is summer. For me it is like a prelude to a prolonged but temporary death. I am overwhelmed with sadness as I feel the new chill in the air.
When drawn together once were caught within
Love was a net stronger than will I guess
When your eyes like a flower make me grin
The eyes speak volumes... Another beautiful Sonnet Yankee.
They say the eyes are the seat of the soul.
Wonderful poem loved reading
I hope you find your "Eyes like a Flower" one day :)
My thanks for sharing, a fine write!
Rob