HOW CAN YOU HURT SOMEONE YOU CLAIM YOU LOVE? HOW CAN YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF, KNOWING YOU MAKING INVISIBLE SCARS. KNOWING YOU LEADING ONE ON TILL THE "OTHER" HAS FINALLY COME. WHEN THEY HAVE ARRIVED, YOU COMTEMPLATE IN GIVING THE FOOL THIER GOODBYES. YOU HOLD ON TO THE FOOL JUST INCASE THE OTHER MAKE A BREAK. THE FOOL STILL CALLING & SHOWING YOU LOVE. YOU KEEP STALLING, AS THE FOOL TEARS ARE FALLING. A FEW PASSIVE HUGS TO KEEP FOOL NEAR. FOOL START TO NOTICE YOUR TIME IS MISSING. AS TIME GOES ON FOOL IS WONDERING, ASKING WHY YOU SO DISTANCE? WHEN MY LOVE IS OVERFLOWING & NEEDING OF YOUR EXISTENT. YOU NEVER ANSWER, YOU JUST DECIDE NOT TO CALL. LEAVING THINGS UP IN THE AIR AS YOU LOOK TO THE SKY, HOPING THIS SITUATION WILL PAUSE. A LOVER IN LIMBO, A CHANCE YOU WILL TO TAKE, A HEART THAT MAY GET BROKEN IF THE OTHER LIKES YOUR BAIT. A HEART THAT CAN NEVER HEAL, IF YOU DONT SHARE YOUR ILL WILL.
Hi summit....I really enjoyed this honest & open poem..something that many including myself can relate to...ty for sharing!!
niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 4, 2013
SUMMIT...I can remember the pain when told I had killed his love, and I all thought was standing up for my rights. Trouble was.....he was the one with the shadow....but as Rob says, it is life, and I now believe if it is true love....it will overcome all. Though it may take time, and a sincere sorry...or two. But if you keep stalling, because you are unsure....it isn't love... Great write...and painful too...Kathy
SUMMIT09OPDALLAS, Texas USAApr 4, 2013
THANK YOU CHERRY & KATIE LOVE IS SO HARD YET WE YEARN FOR IT.
jk2youSYDNEY, New South Wales AustraliaApr 9, 2013
"YOU HOLD ON TO THE FOOL JUST INCASE THE OTHER MAKE A BREAK. THE FOOL STILL CALLING & SHOWING YOU LOVE. YOU KEEP STALLING, AS THE FOOL TEARS ARE FALLING."
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Really liked your poem FACADE
Strong emotions and so honest in every sense of the word.
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts..
here is a hug for that
Rob
ROB WHAT HELL WE ALL JOIN THAT CLUB ALMOST FOR FREE
Trouble was.....he was the one with the shadow....but as Rob says, it is life, and I now believe if it is true love....it will overcome all.
Though it may take time, and a sincere sorry...or two.
But if you keep stalling, because you are unsure....it isn't love...
Great write...and painful too...Kathy
Powerfull poetry. Well said.