Leave me alone...

You're in my dreams!,
I hear these echoing screams,
I need to breathe!,
You keep smothering me,
When your fire burns,
There's nowhere to turn,
You attack me with words,
Like you don't know how it hurts,
Now my backs to the wall,
I don't want to fall,
I've got nowhere to go,
You have to leave me alone,
But you're in my dreams,
You're in my dreams...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
I hate it,
I can't forget you,
Can't erase the day I met you...

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shadow1950
poignant write Tony beware of driving yourself crazy though
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
cafetwo2010
Powerful write Mat. I can connect with
those sentiments.thumbs up
Ladybee42
You have to breathe in deeply in your dream and put your right index finger on the forehead of the aggressor and...

smile grin

Then keep breathing in and smiling and they grow smaller and you grow bigger, try it - I swear it works!

Of course this may just be a poem and if so, very cool one.

purple heart purple heart
fjamesj9701
I can feel your power flowing in this. Good stuff , riveting...jessehandshake
madtat29
Ty shadow..already drove there and now am on the way back...see you soon!...lolwine
jonE2tone
Good write, feel the painfrustrated
madtat29
Thanks cafecheers
madtat29
Were you in wonderland eating mushrooms again bee?...confused ill hafta try that...handshake
Bajanshay
Hi I can totally relate. Great write. bouquet
madtat29
Thanks for givin it a read jesse...appreciate the input budcheers
madtat29
Thanks jonE I want to scream and yell when reciting this one...could be some heavy metal...drinking
madtat29
Hiya Bajanshay Ty for the comment and thanks for reading..wish we all didn't have so many bad experiences ...drinking
Jyonnah
Life is intense, sometimes painfully. I agree with LadyBee about taking power over your dreams. I honestly can wake myself up from dreams if they are too negative. Anyhow, this is a well-written lament of your heart and it's good to epxress that with friends who understand. I believe everyone here can relate. So you are not alone, Madtat! hug cheers purple heart bouquet
darkhorse555
a lovely piece thoroughly enjoyedthumbs up cheers
BBMis4me
Only a very passionate man, with extraordinary artistic talents and very creative, could write something like that.

I love the way you write T.

Hugs and Blessings hug angel heart wings

Stell :)
madtat29
Ty Stellhug your sweet for saying such nice things
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