walking into the moon the shadow of two with you love hold my hand clasped with passion this is my world if only i could put my hands up touching the stars grabbing you a handful all the colours of light an explosion of colours through a kaleeidoscope so beautiful a rainbow your bow on which i shoot the arrow like a boomarang my heart in you a beautiful soul who shot that golden arrow through my heart
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 22, 2013
You sure have the knack for free verse and love poems.Lovely read.
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosApr 22, 2013
Lovely poem. Well penned.
JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAApr 22, 2013
So romantically delightful! touching the stars grabbing you a handful I agree with Poet1, you do have a great skill for romantic poetry, Liam.
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKApr 23, 2013
Liam as soon as I saw the title I knew I was in for a gem and you haven't disappointed its a little treasure if only i could put my hands up touching the stars grabbing you a handful indeed if only, lovely pen kudos
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaApr 23, 2013
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touching the stars
grabbing you a handful
I agree with Poet1, you do have a great skill for romantic poetry, Liam.
if only i could
put my hands up
touching the stars
grabbing you a handful
indeed if only, lovely pen kudos