Subtle

by jimmydean69Kingaroy, Queensland, Australia

Apr 2013 858 Views 5 comments

Subtle!...

Everywhere I walk I find the ones that cannot talk,
Are we here to be silent,
Am I the one left out trying to say,
That one day this could end,
It's not my choice to know,
It's not my choice to let it show,
How come nothing in life is free,
Do we have to pay with our soul,
For the abuse of our role,
No life left inside this heart of mine,
I've been broken by time,
Is there a solution is there an answer,
If there is I'd like to find it, but If there isn't,
Why bother!!....

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Posted: Apr 2013

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Comments (5)

cameal6someplace, Washington USAApr 27, 2013

makes me wonder at times also. The soul bears all burdens of a life untill we pass and set it free.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAApr 27, 2013

It is called caring that is why one pays with their soul. If one did not care and did not feel would that life style be better?

Sometimes in life you just have to give yourself a time out. Your poem was very thought provoking on many different levels.

I picked this video because it has the words to the song on it and that is the best part. It tells you what I wanted to say about your poem I would never want to miss the dance so I refuse to be broken. Be it from loving as a man or woman or just trusting that there is more good in this world than bad.

beautifulyouNew York, USAApr 27, 2013

Wow, just wow jimmydean

JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAApr 27, 2013

There is an answer. That's why we keep searchng and reaching out. Our heart does grow so weary at times, as you've expressed so truthfully in your write, jimmydean. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.