I want you as you are

by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Nov 2009 942 Views 8 comments

I want you as you are

I want you as you are
you've always filled my dreams
no matter what the matter
it's you for me it seems
as human beings go
(and you've gone far beyond...
a semblancy of normalcy)
we've formed a common bond
with our hungriness of passion
and our passion for new thrilling
never will become old fashioned
for as long as we are willing
to go the extra mile
only then tis when we breathe
we see each other smile
satisfied we take our leave

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Posted: Nov 2009

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Comments (8)

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 14, 2009

yes my friend the extra mile is always worth it in the end, thanks for this
rob

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 14, 2009

This was a lovely read ty

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaNov 14, 2009

Good stuff. Very creative.

tetsyNew York, USANov 14, 2009

Ah that's the thing..LOL..I have a poem similar to this but a bit more with lots of imagery..and afraid to post it...but this site is all adult..maybe it will give me the strength to post it later on.

jerseygirl49Petersburg, Virginia USANov 21, 2009

Smart man..lucky girl