Haiku Village Life

by Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida, USA

May 2013 931 Views 7 comments

Haiku- Village Life

Sun heats the body

Rising bringing higher heat

The village now sleeps

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Posted: May 2013

About this poem:

Been awhile since I have done a Haiku hope I got it right????

Pic is my scene from back yard of sunset....

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nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandMay 14, 2013

Nice,
That's really good.

Such a different approach to mine.
I have a hard time breaking the rhyme of syllables

it seems right to me but I'm new to them.
Would be good to here from some Japanese Poets on this subject

online today!

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMay 14, 2013

Very nice, had to look up what it means and now these make sense

lol:-)
Nice use of words

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 14, 2013

in the warmth of falling night

Happygolucky4uOPTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 16, 2013

Thank you so much nonsmoker for reading and the lovly comment on my poem

I read yours it is really good. I do like the rhyme and must try that myself one day soon with haiku.

ladyjewel thank you so much and so glad you looked it up. There are so many different styles of poetry. I wish I knew how to do them all

But I attempt to do the ones I know how to do. I guess I should try and learn more

I love your way of writing. I always feel as if it is a road I have been down in life.

Happygolucky4uOPTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 16, 2013

Thank you so much nonsmoker for reading and the lovly comment on my poem

I read yours it is really good. I do like the rhyme and must try that myself one day soon with haiku.

ladyjewel thank you so much and so glad you looked it up. There are so many different styles of poetry. I wish I knew how to do them all

But I attempt to do the ones I know how to do. I guess I should try and learn more

I love your way of writing. I always feel as if it is a road I have been down in life.

timotiePeshawar, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa PakistanMay 16, 2013

Happy.
Nice picture.::

Nice words.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 16, 2013

Haiku can be fun. This is a good one, thank you for sharing...jessee

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