The Lovers (A Villanelle)

They came together in passion
their love was without ration
it was so full of loving tension

Their love was one in a million
they shared only one vision
they came together in passion

They walked together in union
as if they had taken a potion
it was so full of loving tension

Dreams shared without ration
together they shared a pillow
they came together in passion

No bars here, just love's prison
their love they did not question
it was so full of loving tension

They shared just one notion
to always love with no ration
they came together in passion
it was so full of loving tension
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
one of the most testing forms of poetry but I thought I would give it a try

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Yankee4you
Wonderful and blissful is love!! wine
shadow1950
hi Yankee hope you liked it wasn't easy lol ty for stopping by
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steve1223
A very hard form and you nailed it
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bard76
very clever shadow, wonderful stuff...david.....
Arteee
Beautifully inspiring just loved this shadow1950..
Their love was one in a million they shared only one vision
they came together in passion!! Thank you for sharing..

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shadow1950
hi Steve much appreciate your comment tnx for reading teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Poetnumber1
An excellent write linda,you've done well.Its good to try new things sometimes.
darkhorse555
lovely piece no bars here just love nicely penned linda i enjoyedthumbs up wine
shadow1950
hi Dave ty dear glad you enjoyed teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Arteee ty dear so glad you enjoyed teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi dear M.M ty as you say good to try new styles glad you liked it teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine angel
shadow1950
hi Liam ty happy you enjoyed it tnx for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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