My hair woven in curls, afro high and plump My skin dark brown, with golden highlights all over my body My eyes so deep and enchanting as if they dare you into the mystery My lips full pouting and as red as valentine roses My ocean deep curves beckon you to explore them Me in my raw state, some may claim it to be natural beauty, With no cosmetics, with no false pretenses. But beauty is more than skin deep, so lets take a peak inside at the beauty of my kindness, which my shyness always seems to hide.
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
Heya poetry corner, its been a while :/ such a vain poem but its deeper than how superficial it comes across, well to me anyway.
lorii :: :: Me in my raw state,some may claim it to be Natural beauty with no Cosmetic with no false pretneses. Nice poem.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 21, 2013
Nice to see you Lori and beautiful you are. Shyness is not all that bad as long as it dosen't isolate you from everyone.
CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAMay 21, 2013
I don't see it as vain, but as comfort with yourself. That is something that we all should strive for and hopefully find. Self love is can be hard, but beautiful if you allow it. Nicely written.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 25, 2013
there is more than the skin deep that is so obvious from where it ended this is what got me interested in your poem from the start this was missing for awhile its your signature style of expression one that is well suited coz its simply being who and that who is you!
Comments (5)
Me in my raw state,some may claim it to be
Natural beauty with no Cosmetic with no false pretneses.
Nice poem.
that is so obvious from where it ended
this is what got me interested in your poem from the start
this was missing for awhile
its your signature style of expression
one that is well suited coz its simply
being who and that who is you!