Hands thrust in pockets you walk and mutter Thoughts alleyways of unwanted clutter Watches rather looking at the nutter Squinting two wild cats across the gutter
For all wrongs in life become the weeper Cry o’er some scraps boilin’ in a steeper For not mercy of the market keeper Safe from clutches of the dark grim reaper
Sadness that’s lost in the slums and ghettos Inspired in such classical libretto Pours out like the smoothest amaretto Sung an opera of such fine falsetto
Homeless and wandering drifting afloat In a turbulent sea so sails your boat
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Posted: Jun 2013
About this poem:
Trying to fathom the deepest sense of despair of those who have no place to call home.
Hi Yankee....... the first two lines and the last two really did it for me ...........thanks Regards Nu
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKJun 7, 2013
A really first rate sonnet Chris, in particular I liked the use of musical metaphor in the 3rd stanza, but the entire poem really does capture desolation and despair so adroitly.
Best wishes
Bill
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandJun 7, 2013
Hi Yankee
I feel the pain in this amazing write...
How sad and lonely it must be... without a roof over ones head. Thank you for sharing the plight of many...
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJun 9, 2013
Hi Chris,
What do they say...there for the sake of God go I? A lovely sonnet and I too was impressed with that third stanza. "Libretto,amaretto and falsetto"...such a clever choice of rhyme. Cheers mate.
It takes a heart full of compassion and humility, a mind full of understanding, a longing for justice for others...for anyone to take notice of the plight of those that most people won't notice at all. Great sonnet Yankee...great message.
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJun 9, 2013
fantastic sonnet Yankee imagery is superb fine pen
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 9, 2013
Well written, and its so true, so many walk past and not many see, Like my mom says, "you can see the truth in someones eyes, the suffering shows", Sad to know people can loose all hope and fall so far
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKOct 21, 2017
Any thought given to those less fortunate than ourself is a considerate one indeed ...very interesting to read from one who thankfully is trying to fathom...not from experience...great poem ...may you always have a roof over your head and a very comfy bed ......thanks for sharing
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the first two lines and the last two really did it for me ...........thanks
Regards Nu
Best wishes
Bill
I feel the pain in this amazing write...
How sad and lonely it must be... without a roof over ones head.
Thank you for sharing the plight of many...
What do they say...there for the sake of God go I? A lovely sonnet and I too was impressed with that third stanza. "Libretto,amaretto and falsetto"...such a clever choice of rhyme. Cheers mate.
Like my mom says, "you can see the truth in someones eyes, the suffering shows",
Sad to know people can loose all hope and fall so far