~Door Knob Turns~

a step out into another dimension, horizontal breath a frost clings to the air lost in sight. Snow's yet to lay is a finger tip cold night. Perfect night in gaze a spotted night light as hands found the pockets head back in stare. Periph's pickin up clustered cloud a breath catches the air as a tongue to iced steel. Whats past the black behind spots a light as ears start to burn in the cold laden flowed air. Huge deep breath plundered drawn in . . . . . ~
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Posted: Nov 2009

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Comments (7)

andrew149
really well put.....and it put me right there too, thankyou my friend.......andrew
jazzy75
Stepped into another world an breath...beautiful my friend thumbs up
Bentlee
Lol ty aware, i do love a cold night as i described here.
Bentlee
Thanks Andrew, i guess it really doesn't get that cold there hey?
andrew149
No not quite my friend....where I am it is a rarity to even see snow, we had a sprinkling last year for the first time in 9 years....lol
LADYCOUNTESSA
heart beating brilliant
Bentlee
Ty, Ladycountessa, a tad deep yes lol, ty for checking out my writes.wine hug
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