The Miracle of Rebirth

There was a hush everywhere
as if the world was on pause
an expectancy stirring in the air
not a single sound just silence

What was happening out there?
far away, deep in the outback
a circle stood made of animals
each with ears pricked forward

Staring intently, still as statues
hardly a breath being drawn
in the middle giving birth
A beauteous snow white deer

The fawn is born, a collective sigh
stirs from the spell bound audience
here she is, the promised princess
a plaintive cry as she struggles to her feet

There in the moonlight she stands
regal from the tip of her nose
proudly her mother shows her off
Bambi moves forward to join them

Trembling legs all going each way
Bambi nuzzles her as she stands
this he seems to say is my heir
all the animals approach and kneel

Paying their homage to Silver
exclaiming at her beauty
peace will reign the forest
all drawn together by the birth
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Posted: Jun 2013

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rapturecapture
Hi Shadow

I found myself holding my breath as I was reading your wonderful poem

Stunning thoughts so beautiful to read

Thank you for sharingteddybear hug angel wave

Martina xxx
Arteee
Another amazing write shadow1950 Just simply beautiful! Deer are among nature's most beautiful animals.. Enjoyed this write..
teddybear rose angel2 daisy angel
gnj4u
HI, shadow1950,
This coming together to form a protective circle around new life does give one hope that peace will reign the forest. Thanks for sharing The Miracle of Rebirth.
ladyjewel
This is soo precious, such a sweet, beautiful and amazing poem, so many
wonderful parts to this, i am in love with this poemhug hug bouquet
shadow1950
hi Martina and Ty you hold your breath too as do I sometimes. teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Arteee deer are very elegant ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Poetnumber1
This is one of my favourites from you my friend.Very impressive.teddybear
shadow1950
Ty Joy for your kind words teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
orientalkoru
The pleasure, the pain, the promise and celebration of life...your miracle of rebirth paints a vivid picture...love it a lot. bouquet thumbs up
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