My little canoe

I made a little ‘canoe’, when I was a child,
to risk exploring the ‘river’ by myself...
First I slowly floated downstream
to learn to paddle it...
And I paddled crossways
to test the strength of it...
Then I confidently rowed upstream
to see the unspoiled beauty of the river...
Now my little canoe is well seasoned
to drift silently into any hidden area of the river
where big noisy boats and ships are unable to tour...
Thanks my little canoe ...

freetraveller
Colombo, Srilanka
19 November 2009
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
looking back on my life ...

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jazzy75
freetraveller - i enjoyed your little canoe :-) meaningful message and poem. thanks for sharingcheers
freetraveller
Thanks jazzy75,
this is my second poem on this site but the first in this section and you are the first to comment.

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NeverEndingStory
What a sweet poem ^_^
trurorob
lovely memories invoked here, I could picture the canoe!!
rob
freetraveller
Thanks for your compliment NeverEndingStory...
You're welcome !!laugh

freetraveller moping
freetraveller
Thanks for the nice comments Rob...
You're welcome !!laugh

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