Learning poetry III - Carnival Carousel (Roundel)

Carousel inn on highest peak,
Round and round they quickly spin,
Beacon invites as we speak,
Carousel inn.

Tent for a carousal din,
Memories lost they seek,
Floating feets under Natures basin,
Festive aura sound and reek.

Flying with the spinning wind,
Emotions fast and thick,
Carousel inn.
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Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
The ROUNDEL is a deritave
of rondeau and rondine... It has
eleven lines constructed from two
quatrains, and a triplet.
The rhyme scheme only has two
rhymes and a refrain from the first
phrase of first line, thus, the second
line rhymes with the refrain:.. a. b.
a.B . b. a. b . a. b. a. B..
example:
If he could know my songs are all
for him,
At silver dawn or in the evening
glow,
Would he not smile and think it but
a whim,
If he could know?
Or would his heart rejoice and
overflow,
As happy brooks that break their
icy rim
When April's horns along the
hillsides blow?
I may not speak till Eros' torch is
dim,
The god is bitter and will have it so;
And yet to-night our fate would
seem less grim
If he could know. --- Sara Teasdale

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Comments (2)

Poetnumber1
I sent you a mail.Are you taking part in Nette's poetry contest.I think you should give it a try.I will check out the rest of your poems over there.Nicely conceived piece Morgen,something I will try in the future.Have a great weekend ahead.
morgen90210
Its what got me started. . .
and i am hooked!
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