Young Thoughts & Feelings

I want this poem to be finished
But I’ve got to start with it
I want my task be done perfectly
But mistakes, I can’t get away with

I want to stay up and awake
Yet, I can’t help but doze and sleep
I want my studies be through
But I’ve got to sweat and pursue

I want to hold onto my laughter
But I should get exhausted first
I want always to hang tight
But I lack courage to fight

I want to go reaching for the stars
But I have to keep my feet on the ground
I want to continue my singing
But there’s a need for a song to end

I want to be loved and be loving
But still my heart’s always left broken
Better be just myself, be with my pen
And let these thoughts and feelings be written.
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
This is my first poem ever.

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boyshchrm6
Very good for a first poem.
Expressed well.cool angel grin thumbs up
arenn
Thank you boyshchrm6.. thanks (",)
jazzy75
arenn - an enjoyable poem...you have a talent for writing and i look forward to reading more of your poetryteddybear
arenn
thanks Jazzy, i'll post more for u (",) God bless!
arenn
dunno bouquet
Scholar_Gypsy
Yes Arenn! No doubt I'm blameworthy for having neglected your great lovely poems. But never despair! A true lover will discover this rich mine of your pearly love.
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arenn
thank you so much for that inpiring words of yours.. i keep that in mind. (",)
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