Hands on Game Boy controller mini-buttons pushed as images flash by. Cartoon figures struggle to succeed their mission your power as year by year passes on LCD screens.
As images flash by strategies applied hard lessons learned. Cartoons transform themselves into 16-bit Super Nintendo faces bodies well-toned, strong. Sophisticated programming pays off interest in game maintained.
Hard lessons learned new game, same goal – to win. Exploring improved passages of 32-bit world with keener eyes faster hands, fingers on keys door to next level awaiting. Alliances form, you sit in the darkness of your room illuminated only by screen rays.
Exploring improved passages 32-bit gives way to 64 fantasy approaches reality in appearance only alliances severed alliances formed, game continues images flash by games end, new games begin interest retained.
Fantasy approaches reality virtual-reality goggles donned adrenaline courses through veins via 4 gigabytes of RAM focus achieved amidst the chaos addictions need fuel the fire is fanned.
Adrenalin courses through veins. Life waits outside your Windows world of life-like superhuman and non-human forms. You choose the player who you will become for this game to get yourself to the next level.
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
A metaphor of life's stages of development in this new virtual-reality era.
I am sooo glad I'm not the only one trying to bring this to our attention, I feel[I know]we live in a false world of gadgetry and tv-dominated propaganda, our bonds to the soil to which we're all depended severed, ..., hey, I sense another poem here, you get the picture, also I feel the movie "Surrogates" should be taken to heart by all of us and we should ressurrect the 'community' spirit, bottom line, thanks for your brilliant poem, Massachusetts Take care...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAMar 25, 2010
Nice poem. Now I can understand these poems better. I enjoyed. T/Y.
Hi, Earlgreytea, Thank you for your astute comments. I have not seen "Surrogates" but lament the virtual-reality life that all too often replaces human connections in today's electronically fractured world - especially for our children. The internet, in all of its amazing capabilities, gives the illusion of connections but, without the added human touch, leaves one quite alone.
Hi, agoodguy2have, I know enough about computers to make a living and I'm still learning how to make a life. Writing helps obtain clarity. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
I grew up on video games..still love them but rarely have time to play...fantastic write
AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMar 1, 2014
Nice metaphor GNG, nice work, thank you for sharing this
Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaMar 1, 2014
Good one Joy, all I could think of was playing Indiana Jones lego people, with my son, I'm not very good but I learnt to smash him to pieces with a shovel so that was all I did, just followed him around and kept breaking up his lego man at least I got a good laugh out of it, a very good read Joy
Angie
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 15, 2014
Hi Joy
And a brilliant metaphor it is: I'd never thought of life in terms of a Game Boy controller before... but you make the connection with the aplomb one might expect from one of Boston's finest.
I remember reading this several months ago....you certainly have unleashed a whole pack of metaphors in this nice blast-from-the-past Joy....
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 19, 2014
Hi gnj4u
Adrenalin courses through veins. Life waits outside your Windows world of life-like superhuman and non-human forms. You choose the player who you will become for this game to get yourself to the next level.
I also remember reading this before! Enjoyed reading even more, second time round...
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Seems you like computers.
Take care...
Thank you for your astute comments. I have not seen "Surrogates" but lament the virtual-reality life that all too often replaces human connections in today's electronically fractured world - especially for our children. The internet, in all of its amazing capabilities, gives the illusion of connections but, without the added human touch, leaves one quite alone.
I am glad that you enjoyed this poem and its message. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
I know enough about computers to make a living and I'm still learning how to make a life. Writing helps obtain clarity. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
in this piece gnj4u
Very imaginative write.
Robert
Angie
And a brilliant metaphor it is: I'd never thought of life in terms of a Game Boy controller before... but you make the connection with the aplomb one might expect from one of Boston's finest.
Best wishes
Bill
Adrenalin courses
through veins.
Life waits outside your Windows
world of life-like superhuman
and non-human forms.
You choose the player
who you will become
for this game to get yourself to
the next level.
I also remember reading this before!
Enjoyed reading even more, second time round...
Thank you for sharing...Loved it
Martina xxx
wizard...where's the football kick-about gone? Life was simpler
when I was 11 !
TM