The Game

Hands on Game Boy controller
mini-buttons pushed
as images flash by.
Cartoon figures
struggle to succeed
their mission
your power
as year by year passes
on LCD screens.

As images flash by
strategies applied
hard lessons learned.
Cartoons transform
themselves into 16-bit
Super Nintendo faces
bodies well-toned, strong.
Sophisticated programming pays off
interest in game maintained.

Hard lessons learned
new game, same goal – to win.
Exploring improved passages
of 32-bit world with keener eyes
faster hands, fingers on keys
door to next level awaiting.
Alliances form, you sit
in the darkness of your room
illuminated only by screen rays.

Exploring improved passages
32-bit gives way to 64
fantasy approaches reality
in appearance only
alliances severed
alliances formed, game continues
images flash by
games end, new games begin
interest retained.

Fantasy approaches reality
virtual-reality goggles donned
adrenaline courses
through veins
via 4 gigabytes of RAM
focus achieved
amidst the chaos
addictions need fuel
the fire is fanned.

Adrenalin courses
through veins.
Life waits outside your Windows
world of life-like superhuman
and non-human forms.
You choose the player
who you will become
for this game to get yourself to
the next level.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
A metaphor of life's stages of development in this new virtual-reality era.

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Comments (19)

boyshchrm6
gnj4u: Nice poem.Some symbolism I see.
Seems you like computers.cool angel grin
jazzy75
gnj4u - brilliant poem -- really enjoyed the read applause
Earlgreytea
I am sooo glad I'm not the only one trying to bring this to our attention, I feel[I know]we live in a false world of gadgetry and tv-dominated propaganda, our bonds to the soil to which we're all depended severed, ..., hey, I sense another poem here, you get the picture, also I feel the movie "Surrogates" should be taken to heart by all of us and we should ressurrect the 'community' spirit, bottom line, thanks for your brilliant poem, Massachusetts
Take care...
Pinkpoetress
Nice poem. Now I can understand these poems better. I enjoyed. T/Y.
gnj4u
Hi, Earlgreytea,
Thank you for your astute comments. I have not seen "Surrogates" but lament the virtual-reality life that all too often replaces human connections in today's electronically fractured world - especially for our children. The internet, in all of its amazing capabilities, gives the illusion of connections but, without the added human touch, leaves one quite alone.
gnj4u
Hi, Pinkpoetress,
I am glad that you enjoyed this poem and its message. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
agoodguy2have
you write as if you know a thing or two about computers...even more about life ;-)
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
I know enough about computers to make a living and I'm still learning how to make a life. Writing helps obtain clarity. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
TAR_734
laugh I love the analogy presented
in this piece gnj4uthumbs up
Very imaginative write.sad flower
Robertbouquet
teddybear
tip hat rose
darkhorse555
really very beautifully drawn excellent piece joy angel wine
madtat29
I grew up on video games..still love them but rarely have time to play...fantastic write
Ahyra
Nice metaphor GNG, nice work, thank you for sharing this teddybear
Angel04
Good one Joy, all I could think of was playing Indiana Jones lego people, with my son, I'm not very good but I learnt to smash him to pieces with a shovel so that was all I did, just followed him around and kept breaking up his lego manrolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing at least I got a good laugh out of it, a very good read Joy

Angiehug rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing angel
Fellsman
Hi Joy

And a brilliant metaphor it is: I'd never thought of life in terms of a Game Boy controller before... but you make the connection with the aplomb one might expect from one of Boston's finest.

Best wishes

Bill wine
candykid
I remember reading this several months ago....you certainly have unleashed a whole pack of metaphors in this nice blast-from-the-past Joy....thumbs up
rapturecapture
Hi gnj4u


Adrenalin courses
through veins.
Life waits outside your Windows
world of life-like superhuman
and non-human forms.
You choose the player
who you will become
for this game to get yourself to
the next level.



I also remember reading this before!
Enjoyed reading even more, second time round...

Thank you for sharing...Loved it

Martina xxxteddybear hug bouquet
TadhgusMaximus
Great poem gnj42.....I have an 11 year old son who is a gameboy
wizard...where's the football kick-about gone? Life was simpler
when I was 11 !

TM wave
ImagineLove
Great write Joy! As a techie I totally get this, this is awesome describing our "tech world"!
teddybear hug purple heart
Leony1510
A quite electric write enjoyed it so respecthandshake
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