The Raptor

I come from nest on ridge top high,
I speak with such a shrill cry,
And soar out into the blue sky,
To search with a sharp eye.

For thirty miles I fly around,
Or float like in a dream,
Past woods and fields; all common ground,
Follow a river upstream.

Till last my flight is now complete,
When my prey comes in my sight,
A banquet of fresh blood and meat,
Meet my talons I will smite.

I cry out fear before I plunge,
For panic is my good friend,
At last I swoop my wings and lunge,
For death comes quick in the end.

With strong curved beak I snap and tear,
Ripping clean through fur and hide,
The still throbbing heart of the hare,
Staring up with its eyes wide.

And here and there a muffled moan,
Such a whimpering poor soul,
A raptor by its fierceness known,
Only hunger to console.
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Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
Nature can be a little disturbing at times.

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Yankee4you
This poem was written following the unusual style of Tennyson, an 8 meter line followed by 7 meter...then 8 and then 7...on and on....
cherryreggae
Hi yankee,,,Wow!!! I love the detail & vivid picture bought , to mind.you definitely have a gift, in naturally describing, the land, wilderness, even in all it's harshness. Thanks4sharing:0) Cherie. Really enjoyed readingapplause applause
fjamesj9701
Yes I can agree , viscous viscous world in the wild kingdom. I think this is a great poem, enjoyed a lot. Made me think of a lot of animals from dinosaur to Hawks. I can dig it ...Jessehandshake
Macduff5
Hi Chris,

I only know two poems from Alfred Lord Tennyson:"The Charge of the Light Brigade" and "The Eagle." Your poem, which may I say is very good, would seem to follow that Romantic tradition of the wonders of Nature. I didn't know about his meter so thanks for the education there. Cheers mate. cheers
Odette67

With strong curved beak I snap and tear,
Ripping clean through fur and hide,
The still throbbing heart of the hare,
Staring up with its eyes wide.


This is nature, "Red In Tooth And Claw" Poor little hare.
Very emotive poem Yankee, I like this style. thumbs up purple heart
shadow1950
hi Chris superb imagery and lovely flow expertly penned teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
madtat29
Good stuff yankee...way back i wrote an eagle poem along these lines...a beauty of a write friendhandshake
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