There are no challenges Where I reside For deserted by myself Then this island Is home It is where I scream It is a choice Of finding myself It holds no terrors Or deems to me That this is fate And where I belong
I took that choice For only one Can abandon themselves Yet you gave me The chance to live By choosing Things that would Comfort me And bring me hope But I abandoned hope As one challenge Far too far
So I must choose And it is true love That most glorious Of depth And may I find compassion For a heart That bears none Is truly a lost soul And finally I choose you It matters not Who you are That like me You are a soul That made the choices Of abandoning Yourself For the sake Of others
Excellent to read from you my friend. A delightful piece it is...Jesse
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 26, 2013
to be content with the choices made and move forward to find the love and peace, to choose to be completely ok with every day and who we are:-) beautiful, deep, sweet and complicated as every good set of words should be
RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 26, 2013
Hi Rob long time no see, we keep coming back. I liked your poem but it is so sad. Only you could convey the depths
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Namaste, rob,
to choose to be completely ok with every day and who we are:-)
beautiful, deep, sweet and complicated as every good set of words should be
Nice write about the choice one makes for love and sharing the self..
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All I can say is that this poem is all class. Poignant thoughts, beautifully written. Good to see you back...occasionally. Cheers mate.
a beautiful write
stay well and happy
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Cheers Rob
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