Hush

Sun rising, very slowly
Through the mountain notch
Where mist hangs over
Yellow birches watch
‘Till long autumn nights
Chill the air
Their leaves will fall

Looking up, flocks of geese
Sounded through the valley
Shattering the peace
An urgency for beating
All their wings
Fly in V-formation
Then be gone

Falling apples, make a bruise
Soft rotting smells
Attract the bees
For miles around
With much expertise
Suck in their mouths
The sweet juicy ooze

Shrieking loudly, on a twig
The startled blue jay
Dance a jig and flirt
Feet tightly frizz
Banner ‘blue and grey’
Sounding the alarm
Intruder alert!

Waterfalls, running over
The slippery ledge
Granite covered green
With carpets of moss
Growing down the ledge
Under canopy of
Glowing colored leaves

Winter, coming early
Long shadows grow
Birches are now bare
Before the first snow
Enters hurly-burly
Whispers its wind
A final, ‘Hush’
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
Transitory exchange of a season in a day....

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shadow1950
superb it is as much as what you do not say as what you do. Powerful message great write Christeddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
gnj4u
Hi, Yankee4you,
Winter, coming early Long shadows grow Birches are now bare Before the first snow... Not ready for winter, please say it isn't so! Thanks for sharing these autumn images of birds, Falling apples and Waterfalls that leave the reader with A final, ‘Hush’.
Serenity4two
Wow this is so good Yankee ..
Excellent Sir -it was a joy to read this ..
Warm regards . F wine
Redex
A beautiful read and all so true.
Yankee4youonline now!
Shadow... that is somehow the essence of poetry isn't it...to speak about what's familiar in an unique and unfamiliar way....appreciate you kind comments always...grin
Yankee4youonline now!
Joy...almost still feels like summer up here...70's sunshine everyday.....hope we don't pay for it later...hahadunno
darkhorse555
in the hush very beautifully penned excellent pieceangel thumbs up
Yankee4youonline now!
Fiona.. I love to sit and just watch and listen to nature...as far away from the busy road and city life...and just make mental notes..or sometimes draft a text message to myself...whenever an idea pops...cause you know it ain't gonna last long...beer beer
Yankee4youonline now!
Redex... i'm pleased you liked it!! hug
Yankee4youonline now!
D.H. always a pleasure to write an' share on here... learned a lot watching Fellsman 'specially about English Sonnet poetry...its very interesting to see how other poets style too...it's all good my friend....
Serenity4two
laugh me too !
I text / or write a thought / phrase down immediately before I forget it doh laugh
but seriously , yes it is wonderful to have a little peace ,quiet and tranquilty , away from hustle and bustle , to absorb all the wonderful sights and sounds of mother nature thumbs up well done again on your wonderful poem -F hug
rapturecapture
Hi Yankee

Hush

Very beautiful.

Thank you for sharing good luck

Martina xxxhug angel wave
morgen90210
today lots of scenery poems
and yours stood out so strikingly
thank you
beautifulyou
Lovely and, well, just lovely!happy place
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