Down cheek off chin

Bentlee

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Nov 2009 757 Views 12 comments

~Down the cheek off the chin~

Author: Bentlee

NO . . . . I'M OK TAKE YOUR HUGS AN GO AWAY. . . . sorry it's a messed up day an .. . . an. I've two dry shoulders over here when ur ready. (ok be patient an there for her). There's alot on my plate ya know an it's not you! It's ok to share it an I'll help you through as you do for me an I do for you. Shirt shoulder darkens as she's safe in embrace. Hands in place aside gentle her face loved eyes meet, he kisses away some tears. Reassured~

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Posted: Nov 2009

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A day when really he need's to be there! Think about it guys, why not, it might do wonders eh!

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Comments (12)

HotrodLarrys

HotrodLarrysSt. Joseph, Missouri USANov 30, 2009

Hi Bentlee, Very nice, tho also explaining that a Man Has a Duty to the Woman, In Love, we have to not be so selfish that we forget How Important She is, and you are to Be there for Her, First Things First..... A True Relationship, must produce these Responsibilities, so , It tells a Story!

Love her like there is No Tomorrow!

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 30, 2009

Hi Larry yes it does tell a story an not indifferent to real life either. Ty for your thoughts.

jerseygirl49

jerseygirl49Petersburg, Virginia USADec 1, 2009

So sweet, and tender...Thanx Bentlee,you know woman quite well.

JG

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USADec 1, 2009

Bentlee - Poignant poem. I hope all can be reassured in such a way…to have someone in their lives who understands and cares. :-)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 1, 2009

Ty JG i'm trying to do my best to understand females so's I can be ready for the one lol. Ty:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 1, 2009

That would be nice eh Jazzy, maybe if right away the one in mood gives a simple clarification of sorts. :) ty for your thoughts:)

luvuluvme2

luvuluvme2Smith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 1, 2009

nice, a shoulder to cry on, we all need one or even two sometimes

poetengineer

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaDec 2, 2009

really very expressing touches words,as always u doing great and make the memories come to me as ocean tide,thanks for u dear friend

boyshchrm6

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaDec 6, 2009

Excellent advice Bentlee. They
have needs we often can't understand!

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 6, 2009

That we do Luvu every now an then. Ty for commenting:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 6, 2009

As always my pleasure my friend, cheers Khaled an ty:)

Bentlee

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaDec 6, 2009

Lol boysh so they say eh lol :) cheers ty for commenting.

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