Warning realized

by morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore

Oct 2013 776 Views 9 comments

Warning realized

The heart knew,
Before the mind knows,
The soul warns,
Before your faith is harmed.

The eyes shut,
Before your body is hurt,
The love dies,
Before your life is gone.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Oct 2013

About this poem:

just made. . .
can't think of a title
any ideas?

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Comments (9)

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKOct 16, 2013

My guess on the title should be called warning veri imaginative poem

dkpattanayakBhubaneswar, Odisha IndiaOct 17, 2013

may I suggest a title? it's REALIZATION

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 17, 2013

could it be temptress---or temptation. Morgen I found that hard to read Make your letter bolder in colour.

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 17, 2013

thanks Wayne
good name.

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 17, 2013

dkpattanayak it sounds so perfect
will consider
thanks

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 17, 2013

Redex, really? you think so. . .
now i made it bolder. . .
it don't sound like one. . . thanks

morgen90210OPsingapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 27, 2013

I think long and hard and somehow feel both suggestion were perfect so i tried combining them and it does look perfect.

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 31, 2014

I don't know why, but I just love this...

Maybe b/c it has hope in it... that there are things that warn you before it's too late...

Anyway, just love it... and the way it came about, as well as how the title came to be.