Wild spirits, in a woods Running like the wind Blowing steady over Bare branches howling Since fallen leaves Soaked by the rain Lie on ground, still
Dodging traffic, ghosts On soaked dirt roads Blurry night vision Foggy windshield Laughing at the sight Of swerving cars In driver’s headlights
Screeching loudly, crashing Tearing light from darkness Life from death Blood from my veins Pouring like droplets Strange crimson rains Over and over again
Eludes my heart, freshly planted Now like a lonely tree So patient for you To draw back to me My earthly light Almost extinguished In freshly dug grave
A lonely castaway, is death On a watery journey Across time, immortal Through portals sublime To a place, confusing Where beginning, is the end Not our choosing
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Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
Freaked out lately with bad dreams and dark thoughts of death...crazy time of year or something. So just letting sometimes wild spirits out for a little frolicking and fun, I don't know?? Poetic freedom like free speech rules!
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 17, 2013
Hi Chris
Sonnets may well be your staple diet - but this remarkable write is ample testimony to your writing prowess away from the sonnet scene.
You mix your metaphors with remarkable skill here buddy.
Regards
Bill
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 18, 2013
My earthly light Almost extinguished In freshly dug grave
Dear Chris,
This poem mirrors my thoughts exactly, because I always feel a sense of doom at this time of year. How often I have looked death in the face riding on the motorway in the driving rain and being blinded by headlights. Superb poem.
Here is a special
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandOct 18, 2013
Incredible writing ! well done you Chris !
I hope the bad dreams stop soon ,and you have sweet dreams and pleasant thoughts each night -chat soon -F
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 20, 2013
Hi Chris,
I sometimes think that free verse suits certain moods. I think you have written a truly clever poem here. Funnily enough I had some dark thoughts the other night and couldn't but help articulate them in the free verse form. Cheers mate.
That is just some good stuff, but I guess you probably expect that coming from me but really though excellent penmanship, imagery , and strategic placement of words. I can identify I myself have often and well remembered reoccurring dreams. Maybe slight in variations but scare me all the same. Regards my friend...Jesse
Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKOct 21, 2017
Comments (6)
Sonnets may well be your staple diet - but this remarkable write is ample testimony to your writing prowess away from the sonnet scene.
You mix your metaphors with remarkable skill here buddy.
Regards
Bill
Almost extinguished
In freshly dug grave
Dear Chris,
This poem mirrors my thoughts exactly, because I always feel a sense of doom at this time of year. How often I have looked death in the face riding on the motorway in the driving rain and being blinded by headlights.
Superb poem.
Here is a special
I hope the bad dreams stop soon ,and you have sweet dreams and pleasant thoughts each night -chat soon -F
I sometimes think that free verse suits certain moods. I think you have written a truly clever poem here. Funnily enough I had some dark thoughts the other night and couldn't but help articulate them in the free verse form. Cheers mate.