Wild Spirits

Wild spirits, in a woods
Running like the wind
Blowing steady over
Bare branches howling
Since fallen leaves
Soaked by the rain
Lie on ground, still

Dodging traffic, ghosts
On soaked dirt roads
Blurry night vision
Foggy windshield
Laughing at the sight
Of swerving cars
In driver’s headlights

Screeching loudly, crashing
Tearing light from darkness
Life from death
Blood from my veins
Pouring like droplets
Strange crimson rains
Over and over again

Eludes my heart, freshly planted
Now like a lonely tree
So patient for you
To draw back to me
My earthly light
Almost extinguished
In freshly dug grave

A lonely castaway, is death
On a watery journey
Across time, immortal
Through portals sublime
To a place, confusing
Where beginning, is the end
Not our choosing
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Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
Freaked out lately with bad dreams and dark thoughts of death...crazy time of year or something. So just letting sometimes wild spirits out for a little frolicking and fun, I don't know?? Poetic freedom like free speech rules!

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Fellsman
Hi Chris

Sonnets may well be your staple diet - but this remarkable write is ample testimony to your writing prowess away from the sonnet scene.

You mix your metaphors with remarkable skill here buddy.

Regards

Bill
Odette67
My earthly light
Almost extinguished
In freshly dug grave


Dear Chris,

This poem mirrors my thoughts exactly, because I always feel a sense of doom at this time of year. How often I have looked death in the face riding on the motorway in the driving rain and being blinded by headlights.
Superb poem.

Here is a special hug
Serenity4two
Incredible writing ! well done you Chris ! hug

I hope the bad dreams stop soon ,and you have sweet dreams and pleasant thoughts each night -chat soon -F hug
Macduff5
Hi Chris,

I sometimes think that free verse suits certain moods. I think you have written a truly clever poem here. Funnily enough I had some dark thoughts the other night and couldn't but help articulate them in the free verse form. Cheers mate. cheers
fjamesj9701
That is just some good stuff, but I guess you probably expect that coming from melaugh but really though excellent penmanship, imagery , and strategic placement of words. I can identify I myself have often and well remembered reoccurring dreams. Maybe slight in variations but scare me all the same. Regards my friend...Jesse
Happychatty1
Powerful piece of poetry Yankee thumbs up
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