sweet ocean

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Oct 2013 824 Views 28 comments

sweet ocean

sailing into stars
finding a sparkle
behind the mirror
one soul smiles
within that dream
dancing silver shadows
reflections from
the deep ocean

a soft
yet gentle light
pillows within
one soul
sweetly singing
touching feelings
emotions stir
brewing waves

crashing around
your beautiful feet
kissing gently
white washed emotion
silky touch
salted lips
drinking from
the cup
in such beauty
a shining angel

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Posted: Oct 2013

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Comments (28)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 28, 2013

Beautiful as always Liam.

jonE2toneOrlando, Florida USAOct 28, 2013

Enjoyed, lovely poem

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 29, 2013

very very nice Liam

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanOct 29, 2013

You inspired me

aroused
from a deep sleep
a shadow dancer

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 29, 2013

poetno1 thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 29, 2013

Thank you Darkhorse, a good read as always....Andrew

BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosOct 29, 2013

DH,
Beautifully penned.

Sharon

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAOct 29, 2013

liam you truly have a insite of the beauty in all things. cameal

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 29, 2013

jone2tone thank you for the lovely comment deeply appreciated

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaOct 30, 2013

Absolutely Beautiful Liam you are amazing baby

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 30, 2013

a lovely read this morning. Yes the ocean is sweet when put like that.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USANov 5, 2013

My love

the ocean. I could picture me being one with the gorgeous Atlantic. Nice write my friend

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darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 5, 2013

morgen thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 5, 2013

Hi, darkhorse555,
Enjoyed the dancing silver shadows of sweet ocean. Thanks for sharing.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 5, 2013

Hi Liam

A very sweet poem, beautiful thoughts, really loved reading
sweet ocean...stunning
Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandDec 12, 2013

thank you so kindly soulgodess for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 12, 2013

there can be no doubt, the ocean is a special place for me, followed by the sky...this is a wonderful romantic poem, gentle but powerful like the ocean itself.....great write darkhorse....
Kathy

loveavalancheCape Town, Western Cape South AfricaDec 13, 2013

simple words yet powerful, just beautiful darkhorse