Your write reminds me of these beautiful words of Rabindranath Tagore
“I seem to have loved you in numberless forms, numberless times, in life after life, in age after age, forever.”
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 1, 2013
Hi Chris,
A very Romantic piece. Love immortal...such a profound concept.
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 1, 2013
Hi Chris ... my goodness this is really good ! I love the lines .. "For kindred minds will always seek what comforts us so to speak " When minds connect like this , so too can both hearts and souls ! a precious eternal love indeed -now that would be bliss :-)) Wonderful romantic poetry my friend - well done you ! Warm regards -F
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 1, 2013
Will discover over And over again A love immortal That’s just begun
True love seems to be elusive when we get older, or maybe we get too picky. A most excellent poem dear Yankee.
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosNov 1, 2013
A love immortal That’s just begun
I am enthralled by these lines. Well penned Yankee,I enjoyed this very much.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKNov 2, 2013
A lovely romantic write Chris... an intriguing idea - that love can be immortal.
Best wishes
Bill
Dejavu4uSomewhere, West Virginia USANov 2, 2013
Yankee,
Lovely romantic poem. Very touching. I can tell it is from deep in your heart. Enjoyed. Take care. Blessings! Pink.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 2, 2013
I loved this poem as getting away from say one to one love thinking of love as a big feeling in a pot and hate and anger in another. When love be done it goes back into its own pot to be plucked out again by some lucky person. Hate the same and when one pot out weighs the other than the end of the world bang. Sorry your poem carried me away to all possibilities.
"Love is like the sun coming out of the clouds and warming your soul!" I wish love warmed the souls of all of us - "kindred minds" of this quiet corner - where promise of Immortal Love is in every single line shared by poets. "Longing for love From head to toe" gives us energy to move on no matter how many disappointments keep popping up on our way to love. Many thanks, dear poet, for sharing!
Thanks Bill!! Yea I kind of like working the whole love immortal idea.... love is just too good to miss out on a whole lifetime... say nothing about forever and ever after that...ehhh?
Beautiful, Thanks for the Tagore quote...I was not familiar with it but it most beautifully stated what I was feeling...so very thoughtful of you to share.. many thanks..
Jesse ...interesting point... all the more reason to treasure those we love......
seadancer7Waterville, Maine USANov 11, 2013
*Morning Yankee,& a Happy Veterans Day to you! Gotta Look totally Cool,if you are Dancing in the Vermont Moonlight I would enjoy being your Pen Pal Friend: handshake: My name is Kate from the Great State of Maine where the magnificent mountains meet the salty sea... I am a retired Language Arts/English/Creative Art Teacher who loves to write poetry, novels, documentaries, feature stories, musical& theatrical reviews, cook books and children's adventure stories. My non-profit publishing company, Royal River Publishers is looking for new, quality writers who wish to publish their literary works. LOVE IMMORTAL is a poignant poem filled with some sadness,but it speaks of life's harsh reality of two lovers lost. Will they eventually regain their former, special love? I believe that love is immortal. Do you know M & M, the Connecting Singles Poet better known as Poetnumber1 from Trinidad. He is a gifted poet always on line creating/sharing his amazing poetry internationally. I plan to start publishing his poetry this year. All the Best, Kate Forester Dall
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thanks for sharing..
Your write reminds me of these beautiful words of Rabindranath Tagore
“I seem to have loved you
in numberless forms, numberless times,
in life after life, in age after age,
forever.”
A very Romantic piece. Love immortal...such a profound concept.
I love the lines ..
"For kindred minds will always seek what comforts us so to speak " When minds connect like this , so too can both hearts and souls ! a precious eternal love indeed -now that would be bliss :-))
Wonderful romantic poetry my friend - well done you !
Warm regards -F
And over again
A love immortal
That’s just begun
True love seems to be elusive when we get older, or maybe we get too picky. A most excellent poem dear Yankee.
That’s just begun
I am enthralled by these lines.
Well penned Yankee,I enjoyed this very much.
Best wishes
Bill
Lovely romantic poem. Very touching. I can tell it is from deep in your heart. Enjoyed. Take care. Blessings! Pink.
Sorry your poem carried me away to all possibilities.
I wish love warmed the souls of all of us - "kindred minds" of this quiet corner - where promise of Immortal Love is in every single line shared by poets. "Longing for love From head to toe" gives us energy to move on no matter how many disappointments keep popping up on our way to love. Many thanks, dear poet, for sharing!
I would enjoy being your Pen Pal Friend: handshake:
My name is Kate from the Great State of Maine where the magnificent mountains meet the salty sea...
I am a retired Language Arts/English/Creative Art Teacher who loves to write poetry, novels, documentaries, feature stories, musical& theatrical reviews, cook books and children's adventure stories. My non-profit publishing company, Royal River Publishers is looking for new, quality writers who wish to publish their literary works.
LOVE IMMORTAL is a poignant poem filled with some sadness,but it speaks of life's harsh reality of two lovers lost. Will they eventually regain their former, special love? I believe that love is immortal.
Do you know M & M, the Connecting Singles Poet better known as Poetnumber1 from Trinidad. He is a gifted poet always on line creating/sharing his amazing poetry internationally. I plan to start publishing his poetry this year.
All the Best,
Kate Forester Dall