Faces Of Emptiness

glassy-eyed people
moving as in a dream
looking without seeing
seeing without looking

utter hopelessness
pervading their souls
filling them with despair
and pessimism

lustreless eyes
no inner joy
just a deep emptiness
stifling their souls

dried-up people
shutting others out
shutting themselves in
lost in their loneliness
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
The initial title I gave this piece was "Soulessness" which refers to a lack of sensitivity or the capacity for deep feeling. It focuses on deep emptiness which stifles the soul. This may be the outcome of factors other than loneliness.
I am re-titling it "Faces of Emptiness".

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beautifulyou
All I honestly feel right now is a deep sense of compassion for all in that experience; your poetic description is a strong one socrates. thanks for sharing gift
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Hi beautifulyou

Thanks for your comment.
I share your sentiments.
Have a great day!
doglover14
socrates44,

I am in awe of your talent for verbally expressing much of 'life' as it exists in todays world.

It is bad enough to gaze into the expressionless eyes of adults ~ who for a multiude of reasons ~ have ceased to feel. For some it is lonliness; for others it might be pain; and for many it most likely is drugs.

That is terrible.
But to look into the eyes of children ~ many very young ~ and see blank expressions on their young faces is a travesty. They are not here. That freightening look of emptiness refected in their eyes is like gazing into the depths of hell.

I so glad that someone brought this poem back.
Thank you for sharing.

Madyteddybear
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Mady

Thanks for your kind comment.

This is one of the few pieces of dark poetry that I have written.
Sad to say, but it is the stark reality faced by some persons today.
Your reference to young children is most tragic:

"That frightening look of emptiness reflected in their eyes is like gazing into the depths of hell."
wash2u
Your poem says so much of what I feel about the world and its people in recent years and I despair that I have ignored reading or listening to insightful meaningful items that are out there. . ... not really, just avoided the issue.

After spending 5 weeks away where a poetry reading was obligatory every night it is not easy to sit back with what has been eye-opening on that front on my return.
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wash2u

I am glad you can relate to the message of the piece.

Have a nice day!.
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