My Dream Date

by Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont, USA

Nov 2013 1,198 Views 11 comments

My Dream Date

So it was only reflections,
In a driveway puddle
Frozen over with a skin of ice
On a crisp cold day
Even as flashes of
The sun shining bright
That I was thinking about you
Thinking about a warm fire
Its glowing embers snapping
Sparkling wine and red pasta
Sauce dripping off
My twirling fork
While running my fingers
Through your auburn hair

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Posted: Nov 2013

About this poem:

Totally abstract daydreaming about a dinner date with my dream-girl while out walking on a deserted street.

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Comments (11)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 5, 2013

Enjoyed and thought yes why not see pictures in a frozen puddle as well as the clouds. Look up and ask the universe for your dream to come true. BUT remember the universe needs something in the pot too to keep moving giving and taking at times.

mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 5, 2013

sometimes we want a package that we invision, mean while the love of our life could be standing in front of us. People are only human and to put too maney stipulations on our potencal mate keeps us blind to the reality of true loves call.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 7, 2013

beautifully crafted dear friend

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaNov 11, 2013

Amazing how the thought of someone special can make us feel warm in the cold of winter. And your dinner date...lucky lady...to have someone cook dinner and someone running fingers through her hair...love is in the air! Just made me realize Yankee and ask the question...why do most of us stop doing this once we've got each other and expect to keep the love burning for each other? ........enjoyed and love your poem!

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 11, 2013

Hi Yankee

Wonderful poem...beautiful thoughts

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

Viktoria_GPlovdiv, BulgariaJan 22, 2014

......my dream date too....with special person...:)

Yankee4youOPSt. Albans, Vermont USAJan 30, 2014

Thanks my friends. I suppose if you want to be somebody's dream girl you need to make a few dreams come true! :))

beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 30, 2014

yankee, i never sauce this until now

wonderful write!
romance, with a smile

Happychatty1unknown, Lancashire, England UKNov 8, 2017

Lovely poem just brought to my attention Yankee
Daydreaming visualising ....lovely thoughts
Dream date definitely blessed by great company , sharing food by a open fire ??

online today!

godsprincessOwego, New York USANov 8, 2017

Sorry - it's a beautiful poem but be careful of the twirling fork with the dripping sauce while running your fingers through her hair please. Oh bad me!

Kathy

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 10, 2019

Oddly enough for any man
To day dream about their coming date
Yes sometimes many plays
Over and over again in different endings

Thank you for sharing