A loving pain ...

She look into his eyes and knew he hurt, by the way he held his head away from crowd...
She saw someone approach him and the smile was there, as if by magic it appeared...

She knew everyone thought all was well, when in reality he was living in hell...
He stretched out his hand to take a drink, and standing so close her eyes on the glass she saw his fingers clink...

It hurt her heart, She felt his pain...
Knowing what it feels like to love someone, who may never feel the same...
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
This poem is giving an idea what it feels like to love someone so much and knowing they are in love with someone else...

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cherryreggae
I have felt this it's a hard road to travel, very we'll expressed in a sad reality. You truly, captured these heartfelt feelings, lovely & we'll written sweetnneat ,,,Tyfs,, applause thumbs up applause cherie
SweetnNeat
Thanks so much Cherry, I think its one of the most hurtful things in life. Watching someone you love getting hurt without being able to do anythingwave
Poetnumber1
Beautiful word images woven here. Thanks for this lovely sharing and welcome to the corner.
SweetnNeat
@Poet. Thank you, appreciate the comment and the welcomethumbs up
Yankee4you
You've artfully captured that feeling quite well... hug
SweetnNeat
@Yankee. Thank you dear, much appreciatedhandshake
darkhorse555
very beautiful piece of writingangel
SweetnNeat
@DH. Thank you dearteddybear
gnj4u
Hi, SweetnNeat,
It seems as if he was not the only one feeling A loving pain .... Thanks for sharing. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
SweetnNeat
@Gni4u. laugh he wasn't, sometimes what we crave most is the furthest from our reach. Thanks for the welcome.handshake much appreciated
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