40 words....about something

thought of you unleashes a most welcome enthusiasm. filled of spirit unbound, my mind races, emotion cries out in attention. as I shake off the rusty coat of heartache, I enter into a world of deep smile and gentle nature.
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Posted: Nov 2013
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I don't know what this is to be about but I wrote something anyway...

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gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
As I read your 40 words….about something, I enter into a world of deep smile and gentle nature, too. Thanks for sharing your enthusiasm.
Serenity4two
Well done Hedistuff ! thumbs up

wonderful depiction of the effect someone special in your life can have . Best wishes -F handshake wine
Nuwahri61
'as i shake off the rusty coat of heartache '.......awesome write Hedi .......regards Nugrin
sundayrose1
very strong and powerful and determined Heidistuff. And what a transition to a very calming and gentle feeling in the end...It is so soothing to read and you transported me to a very peaceful place that we can all call sanctuary of the broken soul...

Love it and thanks for the share.
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trurorob
The words of a happy man, content and enjoying life, nice read and within the discipline of forty words.
Rob
darkhorse555
smiling beautifully crafted pieceangel
Redex
wow hedi that was brilliant. Contentment rings outteddybear
Spartacus2012
Hi Rob,
Good stuff my friend..

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Spartacus2012
my apologies i meant Hedi...

Ken
Macduff5
Hi Hedi,

I know what this is about and it is all too true. Nicely done! cheers
Poetnumber1
Nicely done Hedi. I enjoyed the read this morning.
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