thought of you unleashes a most welcome enthusiasm. filled of spirit unbound, my mind races, emotion cries out in attention. as I shake off the rusty coat of heartache, I enter into a world of deep smile and gentle nature.
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
I don't know what this is to be about but I wrote something anyway...
Hi, hedistuff, As I read your 40 words….about something, I enter into a world of deep smile and gentle nature, too. Thanks for sharing your enthusiasm.
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 16, 2013
Well done Hedistuff !
wonderful depiction of the effect someone special in your life can have . Best wishes -F
'as i shake off the rusty coat of heartache '.......awesome write Hedi .......regards Nu
sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 16, 2013
very strong and powerful and determined Heidistuff. And what a transition to a very calming and gentle feeling in the end...It is so soothing to read and you transported me to a very peaceful place that we can all call sanctuary of the broken soul...
Comments (11)
As I read your 40 words….about something, I enter into a world of deep smile and gentle nature, too. Thanks for sharing your enthusiasm.
wonderful depiction of the effect someone special in your life can have . Best wishes -F
Love it and thanks for the share.
SR
Rob
Good stuff my friend..
Ken
Ken
I know what this is about and it is all too true. Nicely done!