mirror image 16 word challenge

wayne34

by wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England, UK

Nov 2013 417 Views 3 comments

mirror image (16 word challenge)

Author: wayne34

Into the mirror peek
Its me starring back
laugh or frown
Its just me stirrin back

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (3)

sundayrose1

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 22, 2013

Wayne this limited words are so effective in creating so much pictures that are otherwise scattered in great many a space.

I love it because the pithy and concise structure, stirs the mind to fit the expression as to what we are conveying...

Loveing every line.

Thanks for the write.

SR

wayne34

wayne34OPliverpool, Merseyside, England UKNov 22, 2013

Thanx Sunday rose yes these few words do make the old gray mind think more to get the ipicture of what we whant th say

morgen90210

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 23, 2013

its so precise
very well done

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